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PostSubject: ~Jack of Blades~   Sun 26 Feb 2012, 5:37 pm

~General Information~

Name: Jack Lorkhan

Nickname/Alias: Jack of Blades

Weight: 310 With armor, unknown without

Height: 6'1"

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Appearance: No one has ever seen Jack of blades without his armor and mask. No one even knows if he is human. He wears a steel set of armor, light, but very durable. Ontop of his torso armor, he wears a dark red cloak, using the hood. The robe is very tatted once you reach his shoulders, going no further than the waist. The cloak, it seems, was made only to cover one's torso. On his stomach, he has strapped onto him, two masks. These are the masks of his fallen family. They are both long dead. Jack has his mask on, always, with his hood up, so that no man may ever see his face, or any part of his head besides his eyes. His eyes are very strange, where there should be white, there is black, where there should be color, there is a red area outlined and inlined by gold. The only normal part of his eye is the pupil. His height is around six feet. His weight cannot be determined due to the armor.

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Personality: Jack has a rather simple veiw on life. If it doesnt effect him, it isnt his problem. He cares only for himself and his friends, and is capable of killing mercilessly. He acts rather calm and unemotional. Even as a child, he was always in complete control of his emotions, only feeling how he wants to feel. Ironically, he has a rather interesting veiw on philosophy. No one truly controls anything. He beleives that no one is truly responsible for their own actions and thus, holds no grudges. Interestingly enough, Jack loves to joke with people. He loves pranking and general confusion. Why? Well not even he knows, he simply knows he loves to prank and confuse people. Many people see Jack as an idiot due to both the philosophy and the joking, but in truth, he has the IQ of a genuis. He enjoys when he is challenged mentally, and usually refrains from interefering directly. This allows him to obtain more information from the target, allowing him to kill the target with ease. Raised the way he was, Jack has a natural ability to horde information inside his mind, and formulate new data from previous occurences, making him someone who is able to think on his feet with more than ease.

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~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: ANBU

Letter Rank: A

Village: Kirigakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Genjutsu/Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity: N/A

Special Characteristics: Lorkhan - The ability itself revolves around the manipulation of the user's mind and muscles. Essentially, this allows the user to move at an astounding speed, at least twice as fast as anyone the same rank.This also gives him a pain resistance, due to the pain caused by increasing his muscle speed.

Itanimulli - This is the ability to create illusions without handseals, and change them with nothing more than a thought. These illusions are not broken by kai, or any normal method of breaking them. They cannot be seen through by any doujutsu. However, the way to break it is to simply realize you are in a genjutsu, now this is not so simple as "He noticed he was in a genjutsu, it broke" The victim must actually find a way to notice that they are in a genjutsu For this, I will have at least one flaw in the genjutsu, if nessecary I will tell an admin or mod where it is, so that I wont be considered cheating. With this, and Lorkhan, he cannot use anything other jutsu.

~History/RP Sample~

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Gennin/Academy
Unlike most people, Jack does not have a dark past, or an unhappy life. He simply lived peacefully until he decided to become a shinobi. That is where the true madness started. Most would love to beleive that schools are safe and fun for kids. They, of course, know nothing. In the Academy, Jack grew distant, growing a cold personality and refraining from building friendships. In short, he was bullied. Of course he wouldnt fight back, he was taught that hurting people was wrong. From the constant making fun of his mask he always wore, to his insane ability to use illusions, and barely any ninjutsu. To be honest, he had litteraly no skill for ninjutsu, and instead made illusions to make it seem like he did. He didnt really have the body for advanced taijutsu, so he simply used a method he liked to call Beserking. Essentially the point of this style is to take hits without them doing much damage.

While normally, this would scar a child, it molded Jack, allowing him to think far better than most people. After the first year in the academy, he became the rookie of the year. He used both his illusions and taijutsu skills to allow him to pass. Strangely, he noticed a pattern with his illusions, they always had a flaw, and no matter how hard he tried they would always have a single flaw. It was at this time that he began to study genjutsu effects on oneself. That is when Lorkhan activated. His hidden ability to move twice as fast as normal.

Chuunin
For the next few years, up until the chuunin exams, his life was normal for a ninja, with only minor problems occuring. That is when something horrible happened. His parents were killed by two missing ninja who needed a place to hide. They had only recently left Kirigakure and had decided that they needed a place to stay for the night, due to Jack's home being so close to the edge of Kiri, it made an ideal spot. However, when Jack got there, he saw his parents laying in pools of blood, with two ninja talking to each other. Quickly, he formed an illusion that made it seem as if he fell to his knees crying, when in reality he grabed the kitchen knife. While he did that, the two ninja began laughing at the little boy. Jack however, ran back in and slit both their throats, whilst they were stuck in an illusions. Strange how they never noticed his eye color kept changing.

After a minute, an ANBU jumped in, seeing the little boy crying. Jack immediately canceled the illusion, knowing that the ANBU would easily notice the flaw. He convinced the ANBU that he was good enough at illusions to trick the two missing ninja, who were only chuunin themselves, simply older than him. The ANBU immediately took him into custody. It was strange, a boy of only fifteen killing two chuunin with nothing but an illusion and a knife. After searching the files and seeing that the boy was actually Jack, a chuunin who was noted for his incredible illusions, he decided to ask Jack if he would join ANBU. Jack, eager to do anything new to get his mind off the attack, said yes rather hastily. Unfortunately, or fortunately, depending on your veiw, Jack went through hell to get up to ANBU standards. While he was not a prodigy for anything more than illusions, he eventually fell in line as a cadet, more than most could say, actually. Many tried out for ANBU, but only Five got in that time around. It was a great day for Jack. Unfortunately, he was then put into full duty.

ANBU
After many assassinations, Jack began to love his job, with his illusions it was easy to do stealth missions. He had also found that when someone noticed the flaw and figured out they were in a genjutsu, they instantly broke it, not even needing to use kai. However he also noticed that if they used kai without realizing they were in a genjutsu they would not break it. In fact noticing the flaw was nearly the only way to break it. The other was to die. Jack had grow somewhat friendly with most ANBU members, making jokes even on missions and causing small havoc for certian people. Eventually, Jack Lorkhan died... In his place Jack of Blades stood tall. The mask that so many had made fun of him for became his calling card. The files on Jack Lorkhan disappeared, instead stating that he died during the attack on his family. Only the kage and ANBU members knew the truth. After many years of training in ANBU, Jack was promoted to jounin, unofficially of course. He was actually a rare occurence, a chuunin ANBU, until this point at least. He led a few teams of his own, but due to untimely deaths from enemy shinobi, he did not get to connect with any of them. He was eventually put under Sanbi no Hakudoshi, and is still a new person to Sanbi's squad.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Jack of Blades~   Mon 27 Feb 2012, 8:21 pm

If you want an A rank ANBU position, you'll need a longer personality, as well as a description on your appearance. Doesn't gotta be clothes, but his body. Scars, muscle, etc.

Add a tab bit more history.

The element Darkness wouldn't be possible without a Kekkei Genkai.

Itanimulli

I don't get that one.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Jack of Blades~   Mon 27 Feb 2012, 9:07 pm

Edited, Edited, Removed forgot about it, and finally
Itanimulli is the ability to create genjutsu without really using genjutsu. Let me put it this way, there is the clone jutsu, right? it cant do anything but make illusionary copies. With this, I think about it, clones pop up. However, each illusion I make has a flaw, something I will pm a mod/admin if required. Pretty much, what some people do with elements, such as completely manipulating lightning without jutsu, I have done with illusions. It isnt special, so if I do something crazy like make the world turn to tsukiyomi, it would automatically break, it breaks once they realize they are in an illusion, and want to get out.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Jack of Blades~   Thu 01 Mar 2012, 1:14 pm

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Make it the use of only one hand seal for any illusion, or simply for more complicated ones. The method of disrupting genjutsu by applying a surge of chakra into a person is also ignored, right? How so?

I recommend replacing "any doujutsu" to "most".

Lorkhan - This need a small drawback of some sort, though it may work better as a technique.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Jack of Blades~   Thu 01 Mar 2012, 5:08 pm

More complicated ones with require a handseal. The method of KAI works on normal genjutsu, the reason is the chakra from a genjutsu goes inside the victim's chakra system, once they surge it, poof, however these illusions work differently, they affect the senses directly, avoiding the chakra system entirely, so unless one has chakra in the sensory parts of the brain, it would do less than nothing. The reason pain doesnt work is the same reason.

I dont like how doujutsu make illusions useless, and frankly, no doujutsu has been made to be completely genjutsu, if that happens, that doujutsu will be able to break it.

For Lorkhan... well he already cant use ninjutsu, also the pain resistance is a double edge sword, someone his him in a lethal but not very painful spot, he wouldnt even notice.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Jack of Blades~   Thu 01 Mar 2012, 6:19 pm

Hm... works for me.
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