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Ryusaki Toketsu
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PostSubject: Ryusaki Toketsu   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 5:47 pm

General Information
Name: Ryusaki Toketsu

Nickname/Alias: Ryusaki, Angel of Death

Weight: 170 lb

Height: 6'0

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Looks:
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Ryusaki's hair is black, and somewhat spikey. From time to time, it sticks out just a but, and usually it comes down over his neck. From time to time, it will look uncombed, as it is basically unmanageable. Appearance: Ryu's a average build like person. Not specifically bulky but neither thin in any way, a perfect mix for body Types. He has dark skin, and purple eyes, with his hair often looking uncombed, and usually with a lazy stance and outlook. Ryu stands about 6'0 in height as well. (see above spoiler) Ryu Also wears a pendant around his neck at all times With the words "angelus mortis" inscribed on it, being angel of death in latin

Personality: Ryusaki is a cold person, often avoiding getting too close to somebody. Through chance he often opts to take the violent approach out of situations unless ordered otherwise. Or it is obvious he won't win or the result would be a massacre. He thinks his actions through trying to consider where the ripples of his actions will leave, trying to keep the effects as contained as possible. He is a very silent person, only speaking his mind when asked or he feels it is utterly important. He will usually follow orders given and is a very perceptive person. Ryu tends to trust only those who are extremely close to him, anyone else has to work for his trust. Even then his attention to detail will catch alot of people off guard.


Rank Information:


Rank:Former Goryu of the Sand, Former Hokage, S-rank Wanderer

Village:
Former Hidden Sand, Hidden Leaf. Konohagakure

Skill Information:

Skill Specialty
: Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity: Katon and Fuuton

Special Characteristics
: Finikusu, his kekkei genkai gives him a near totally mastery of the fire element. Being nearly immune to it as well, and able to absorb heat and fire "spawning from chakra" for strength, heating his body among other things. Ryu's Taijutsu also uses a unique style of taijutsu called Aitsou-Ryu-Dande. It centers around if on defense, the opponents attacks enter a certain area around the person. The area depends on the attack range of Ryu, he waits and creates a counter attack. When not on defense, Ryu attacks with quick powerful strikes, increasing his attack power with fire.

Seal Identification: Ryu is an experienced ninja and has been apart of many battles. As such he is capable of identifying the seals of different elements and jutsu types. However for this to work he must see the hand seals either partially or fully to know what is coming. He cannot identify the exact jutsu used only a general type. Like it's ninjutsu or genjutsu etc.

Jutsu

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History/Background Story:

Genin Arc


Ryu graduated from the academy at the age of eight years old. He was overall disliked by those around him in general. Never a good reason why, he was just the kid that they found easy to make fun of. He didn't per say make it hard for them either. Ryu would take the punishment, fueling their anger. As time went pass they would escalate in what they did to him. Beating him up "accidentally" throwing kunai at him during training among other things. Sure he would try to tell the teachers or do something better about it, but there was nobody to tell. Ryu's father was a ninja who spent as little time around him as possible on purpose. His mother was equally as distant, just not physically. Blaming him for every misfortune that befell them. Through this all training, was done by him alone. Trying his best to hone the basic skills he created over the years. That was until he was assigned a squad and a jonin. His jonin, saw that Ryu had potentiol, but non of it that could be unlocked through training by himself. Instead his jonin took him on as a personal, student. Giving him special training away from the rest of his squad, increasing Ryu's skills in the basic arts. This training continued even through to chuunin, giving Ryu the only parental figure he would ever know.


Chuunin Arc

Ryu and his squad were nominated to take the chuunin exams after around three years of being jonin. The reason why it had taken so long was based solely off the fact that their teacher wanted to make sure they passed. He was a proud person, and had no intention of leaving a scar on his name if they failed. Now eleven years old Ryu was now an average skill level. After three years of specialized training with with a jonin, Ryu would be much more skilled than that. There was much to work on though, and his teacher wanted to at least teach each of the students of their elemental affinity. Ryu had just begun to teach him how to use fire techniques. Ryu had far from mastered the technique, even so they were able to get through the second part of the exams. However though this group managed to avoid a preliminaries getting through the final stage would be more than a challenge. Of twenty possible people who took part, only about six managed to graduate. Ryu was luckily one of those six, but one of his old squad members weren't so lucky. Through just chance they were transferred to a different squad since the old set had graduated. At this rank is when Ryu began to show his skills and blossom into a skilled ninja. Through more intensive training, Ryu gained more control of his fire release. After his teacher had felt like he had given Ryu enough info about his fire release he decided to pass down a summoning to him. The summoning was a wind beast that had been handed down from generation to generation, since the jonin had no kids he decided to give it to the next best thing. Ryu had no way to control the summon at first, at one point even injuring him and won't for the rest of his chuunin carrer. Towards the end, his mother overdosed on alcohol and died. Though slightly saddened Ryu refused to attend the funeral, filled with anger from neglect of his childhood. His father did not attend either, Ryu simply put the thought out as he completed missions and moved onto the rank of jonin.

Jonin Arc

By this time Ryu had become a recognized ninja. Even now he remained to train with his old teacher that over time created a father son bond between the two. As time passed his old teacher began to teach Ryu how to control the summoning. He also helped Ryu perfect and develop some of his own special jutsu's for this rank. From here they remained friends as it had been almost six years since Ryu became a chuunin. At the same time as he was gaining a father he was losing one. After the death of his mother his father grew even more distanced from him now that there wasn't much pulling them together. Soon the father and son were more like rivals then they were family, competing witch each other to the point that one of the few missions they were on together ended in total failure. The death of several people, among other things, they both blamed the other. Eventually they figured it would be better to just split their own seperate ways. Ryu would remain a jonin for three more years while his father would join the anbu. At some time his father was captured in the field and commited suicide to avoid having to talk about his actions. Because of the nature of his work, no body was ever recovered. It is not like there was many people to bury him, as Ryu purposely broke off all contact with him. He had no thoughts of bringing back that connection just because the man was dead. But now he only had one "close" friend left, who felt he had taught him basically everything. Close to his death and final weaks before dying in the field, Ryu's sensei began to teach him genjutsu. He found out that he had a natural affinity for it, though it was overshadowed by his basic taijutsu and good ninjutsu skills. Ryu left it as an option but never pursued it, that is until his teacher died.

Goryu Arc

After the death of his old teacher Ryu continued to increase his skills. He began to move closer on in genjutsu but still refused to move it as a regular fighting technique. Ryu still left it as a last resort option, the few he bothered to learn were reserved for when he truly thought that it would work or when he had the element of surprise. Other than that he would never be quick, resorting to what he was truly ready for as ninjutsu. Training hard this is when he moved onto genjutsu, kenjutsu and his second element. His worry that if he slacked off he could lose the position drove him to train harder than he ever had in his life. Peaking to where he thought that what he thought was the best he could do in genjutsu he moved onwards to his second element. Ryu incorporated the same tatics of training he had for the first element, knowing that in a sense they were pretty much the same. He decided on certain of his own jutsu's to combine the two elements to increase their destructive force. Soon after he also began to work on kenjutsu, but while he liked it more than genjutsu, focused even less on it. Only learning two techniques while keeping a katana sealed away in his wrists to be summoned for easy access. Around the end of his first year achieving the rank, Ryu and someone else name artemis became caught in a fight for the sand village. During the time of the fight Ryu passed out, waking up in medical cares a few days later, hoping not to cause a failure like that again.

Summons


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(I had made this a while back. I keep asking people and they said don't drop it, but I will if I should, just putting it here in case.
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Village: Wanderer

PostSubject: Re: Ryusaki Toketsu   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 5:56 pm

New Update awaiting approval. Also request that I be allowed to learn some of the 8 gates in some shape or form
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaki Toketsu   Sun 08 Jan 2012, 9:48 pm

Name: Kyōkaen

Put more detail into that

Name:Hisui Kana

You should explain more on how tough that barrier is. How much it can take before it breaks.

Name: Daienkai

Add a size and the destructive force of this

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Remove all the Genjutsu if you don't have the specialty
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Name: Shinsoku (神速, God-speed )

Remove that. That ability itself is unapproved.

Name: Mikazuki no Mai Kage

Explain what the ability itself does. If you use that without using the other ability, people wont have any clue what it does.

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Remove any abilities that manipulate light. That itself is a Kekkei Genkai, or a type of Genjutsu, if used in an illusion way.
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Name: Kouen

More detail, like the width and all that.

Name: chakra suru

That would be either time-space, or the absorption seal rip off, which that technique alone isn't allowed atm.

Name:Hiken

Needs more detail

Name: Air Barrier

More detail

Name: Hokkyokusei

Deflect fire attacks doesn't make much sense here. Deflect as in return it to the target, or just have it bounce off in some random direction? Plus this needs a duration of how long it stays, as well as a cooldown for when you can reactivate it.

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Also, you have a bunch of jutsu listed multiple times on your app everywhere. It's a bit messy. Might wanna fix it up.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryusaki Toketsu   Sat 04 Feb 2012, 11:09 am

Have you fixed the issues found in this application, Ryu?
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