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PostSubject: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 7:01 pm

~General Information~


Name:
Tekiou Kinniku Kobushi

Nickname/Alias:
Wrestling Monkey - Seiyuuki no Kakutou
Powerhouse in Idiots Clothing - Baka no Kyōgō-fuku

Weight:
176 lb.

Height:
5 ft 7 in

Age:
13

Gender:
Male

Appearance:
He is on the verge of being built yet lean, and is an incredibly strong person thanks to his father training him and asking him to choose a taijutsu art of which he would like to go into (it is a custom in the fathers side of the family to utilize an excelling taijutsu realm), and he chose free-formed which he liked because of the great strength most of the moves took. As a result of his fathers training, his body is very lean, bordering on no muscle at all, however this is a trick as when he goes through intense physical pressure, his muscles suddenly show with very improved facial expressions from when he had none.

His eyes are strong and determined, and are also black in color just like his hair. He has a scar on his right cheek coming from messing with a weapon during his childhood learning never to mess with a knife again. He has a large goofy grin usually, taking everything into consideration as an adventure or game. He is usually seen as someone very energetic and constantly moving, his upper and lower body having great power and speed with a mixture of an incredible willpower. He shares the trait of "hiding" his muscular frame with his father who like his own father had the same effectiveness as it usually would fool people in combat.

Clothing:
He usually wears a strawhat, which he took a liking to during his fathers training and thus wanted one, he has a band that allows him to wear it around his neck when not . He is also someone who hates to wear anything that has to do with uptight personalities and thus wears things he likes instead of what normal ninja wear, he also doesn't wear his headband normally while inside the village, and ties it around his arm when out on a mission.

He has on a long shirt, red in color, as his favorite color is red and seems to look more like a sweater vest with three buttons in the middle of it. His shorts are light blue, and go to his knees where they are rolled up from the bottoms, showing that they may actually be pants, though he has stapled them in order to make them more shorts instead. He wears original sandals instead of the grieves that most ninja wear, it allows him to have more maneuverability as the regular grieves feel more restrained than his sandals.

He is usually the one that wears wraps the most after grueling missions because of his high-risk close range.

Personality:
"Spirited" - Hotblooded
A characteristic of his character, the thing that drives him to master physical combat at his disposal, that he can use with his body. He is someone that arises from the ashes when others can't someone who believes fighting fiercely and battling others is the only way to prove your true weight, in a situation. He is someone that rushes ahead, and screams after he has been defeated or after victory in a shrill. He is also someone who doesn't give-up on his friends, as promises, aspirations, and his own strength, drive him forward.

Straight-Forward
A person that looks forward, doesn't turn back, and gives people second chances as comrades if they are willing to change. He hates to see things in two ways, and likes to look for one way. He also figures in battle, if their is a "boss", go directly to them, instead of the individuals sent, and the battle is done from their. He is someone who doesn't dwell on his old actions, and tries to only improve himself as he moves forward. He is also someone who tries to keep up a fierceness accord, staring at his opponents with either a smirk, a frown, or in anger, without fear.

Friendly
Being one of his most significant traits, and one of his best qualities. He is a friendly person, he doesn't mind talking to people, or making friends, training with others or giving people his own point of view on things. He is also someone who tries to show his feelings better than he talks, makes promises to people, in order to drive himself to be strong. He cares for his friends, his village and his own abilities. He also has the utmost respect for those he considers heroes.

Loud
He is an incredibly loud individual, speaks from the heart, and not from his head, getting him in trouble. Whenever he sees something wrong, he doesn't choose to think about the consequences, thanks to his very straight-forward view. He will often get into many arguments with people around him.

Reckless
Very reckless, and someone who often does things on how he feels, bypassing all orders if he sees that it is wrong in his eyes. He does things such as goes after a "ring-leader" of a criminal group, instead of just stepping back. He has a significantly, stubborn nature, and those that watch him call him, very dangerous to be around. However, within this recklessness lies adaptability, in which he uses if he carelessly moves forward.

Simple
An incredibly, simple person. He is honest to himself, talking towards his opponents about his stupidity all the time (ironically, he is very good with in-battle tactics, though not long-range planning). When dealing with a situation, and he has his mind set on something, he usually has a one-tracked disposition, goes towards it without stopping, and doesn't angst about the pain gotten along the way.

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification:
Genin

Letter Rank:
C

Village:
Konoha

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:
Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
None

Special Characteristics:
He uses only wrestling techniques in battle, when offensive. His straw hat and scar under his right eye.

~Jutsu~

All Academy Techniques + Water and Tree Walking Abilities

Name: Kuwareru Bakugeki-ki - Quarrel Bomber
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
An axe-bomber clothesline (a two-fist blow), which can be used much like a sword swing, and has incredible power backed into it.

Name: Daburu Reggu Sūpurekkusu - Double Leg Suplex
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The user grabs the opponent from behind, grasps their thighs and then slams them backwards with a powerful suplex, driving them into the ground.

Name: Sutōmu Doraiba - Storm Driver
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
A harsh powerbomb where the user holds the opponent up at an angle leaping, and then smashes the opponent deep into the ground.

Name: Bāningu Kurinchi - Burning Clinch
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The user jumps on to an opponent’s back, wraps his legs around theirs, grabs their wrists, and pushes both arms forward, attempting to dislocate the opponent's shoulders.

Name: Furaingu Reggu Rariatto - Flying Leg Lariat
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
Also known simply as the Leg Lariat. It is a jump spinning kick to the opponent's neck. Forcing them into the ground with a strong kick.

Name: Tawāburijji - Tower Bridge
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The puts his opponent face-up across his shoulders and then grabs their head with one hand and a leg with the other and pulls down on both sides.

Name: Kin'niku Doraibu - Muscle Driver
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The user runs up to his opponent and places his head between their legs. He then leaps up, flips the opponent upside down, places his feet on the underside of their arms, and drives them into the ground ferociously.

Name: Kin'niku Basutā - Muscle Buster
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
He places an opponent's neck on his shoulder and grabs their thighs. He then jumps up and lands in a sitdown position, causing damage to the neck, spine, and groin. The technique has immense power, and thus, is a secret technique that he is trying to perfect even greater. This is his signature move.

Name: Dō Takkuru - Body Tackle
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The user runs towards the opponent, placing the weight of his entire body into a full blown tackle, capable of great damage to the opposing object or body.

Name: Korison'ejji - Collison Edge
Rank:
Type:
Description:
He starts by grabbing his opponent's right wrist with his right hand and their left with his. Then he twists his opponents arms around each other to the point where their right hand is once again on the right side and the left hand on the left side. Next, the user releases the hold by uncrossing his own arms and the force of breaking the hold flings the opponent into the air, spinning in various directions.

To finish the move, the user jumps up after the opponent and grabs their near arm under his own (so that the opponent is upside down and the user is sideways with his stomach against their back), reaches between their legs to hook their far thigh with his other arm, wraps his legs around their head and far arm, and falls to the ground so that the opponent lands head first.

Name: Nanbā 1 - Number 1
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
A punch thrown with such strength from the user that it causes much more devastation than a normal punch. The user winds up the punch, (which takes one post) and then slips forth with a punch so strong, the opponent is sent flying by the sheer strength, capable of critical damage if the opponent is hit with it directly. (No it is not Cherry Blossom Collision and doesn't have near as much power it is a very strong haymaker.)

Name: Jūyōna Rebā - Critical Lever
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
Sitting on his opponent's back, the pulls back on his chin with both hands. The technique is able to critically injure and if strong enough, rip an opponents body into two. Though the user hates killing opponents and thus never does so. He can break their back.

Name: Kin'niku Sutoretchi - Muscle Stretch
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
a fairly simple, yet effective submission hold. The user starts out crossing the opponent's legs so that one ankle falls into the pit of the opposite knee and has the wrestler position his own leg between them, so that he faces the opposite direction and both of the opponent's legs are stuck in those positions.

Next, the user reaches back, as if to apply a sickle hold by simply grabbing the opponent's head. Instead of doing just that, the user elevates the opponent's body by leaning forward and pulling them into a kneeling position.

Name: Saidogādo - Side Guard
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description:
The user grabs his opponent's right arm and slams them face down into the ground. He then begins pulling back on their arm in order to try to break it.

~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story:
Growing Up Arc:

Born on May 5th, Tekio was birthed to his parents Tetsuka and Umisha Kobushi both proud parents in their early twenties.

At a young age, he was already decided to become someone of the ability in taijutsu, his father excited for him to learn about the instincts of becoming something great, a new generation of blood would brace the path. He would take his son going through rigorous trainings in order to set him on the path of being a shinobi of taijutsu, teaching him the tricks of the trade and beating the fighting instinct into him. He would enter into the academy at age eight.

Everyday, in the academy, he would prove to have greater ability in body arts then the rest of his comrades, the only thing he had a true knack in really thanks to his fathers improvement of his skills, no one could beat him in close-range combat. At a later age, while still within the academy, his father told him that he would need to progress into an individual art, after showing him some of the things his father had known, and having a wealth of results, he chose freedom fighting of which his father would approve due to his sons creativity and ingenuity in combat.

Academy Rising Arc
He learned the basic techniques of the academy, he decided to stop learning or trying to learn any more ninjutsu techniques, or aspiring to be a specialist in these. His fathers influence and training were all he truly needed and with them he would be a "Badass" taijutsu master. This was what inspired him for his dream, after being laughed at by his class, he would announce to becoming the strongest most powerful taijutsu specialist around.

Genin Rising Arc

Leaving the academy at age 12 and going through his fathers harsh training, he would be admitted into a team, passing the test with a battle against one of the academy teachers to pass, and showed off a move he had not yet perfected. Joining with his team, the road was cut as he was one that would normally be perceived as an idiot, and thus was reacted to as such. Usually, he would survive by either dumb luck or his incredible will, also combining his ability to fight with his reflexes and physical prowess as a fighter, he was one of the best taijutsu users of his generation.

Within a year of training, he would become much stronger as a fighter, he went through the subsequent phases of his masters training, and created and perfected a move that he made his own the "Muscle Buster", a move that he himself had made from his own thoughts and skills in order to defeat an opponent and have his own killer move. He also created "Falling Towers" utilizing a technique he learned through training against his comrades to also make it another unique move to his own style. He became stronger due to tenacity and his ability to fight and naturally adapt to situations and think up solutions on the spot with his instincts (he is stupid).

Chunin Rising Arc

{i]??? Arc[/i]

Roleplay Sample:

He gripped the dummy, making a straight ways towards the ground in a flash, taking his time with the strength he had proceeded to drop, causing a great crash, towards the ground, a small crater developed underneath his bottom as he released the dummy, its body was crushed by both the gripping force and the effects of the man's physical strength thanks to height. He looked back, and took a small huff, turning his head a bit.

"That won't work, I need to place a bit more oomph to it..." He told himself, as he began to tap his foot against the ground watching the large crater for a second. He took his hand to the dummy, and then watched the broken pieces, it didn't have a chance of even surviving that attack, Tekiou was too much of an idiot to hold back his physical strength in that situation. He paused for a second, and turned his body, looking for a decent replacement. He began to run towards a boulder, that he saw close by and nodded to himself.

"This should be good, it may not have legs or a body, but me gripping it should be enough." He told himself, beginning to smooth it over his shoulders, placing it to his back. As he did, he moved back into the swing of things and clenched his fingers into the boulder he would think for a second, taking a serious look on his face. "OK, here goes nothing." Tekiou threw the massive boulder into the air, showing his physical strength, he would jump and then go towards it, twisting himself in the air, as he went for the simultaneous grab, the twisting of his body stopped for a moment, as he would flip it upside down, and begin to spin rapidly. "Kinniku B-" He stopped as he began to feel himself start to get dizzy, gasping as he would make the shift of his body into one that was about to crash.

"Ahhh!" He screamed, his body falling towards the boulder, as he slammed his head into it, his eyes going white as he fell off and rolled to the ground, drool coming from his mouth. It took him a bit of time, he lifted himself once more, posturing, he rubbed his head, gasping with sounds of pain. "That hurt..." He would say to himself, looking at the boulder with a maddened expression. "I can't get the timing right..." He growled and screamed as he kicked the boulder, punting it towards the other side of the training field, he huffed. He then sat Indian style, as his eyes closed, beginning to eat some jerky he had saved earlier. "Come on, theirs gotta be something I'm doing wrong..."

He silently ate to himself, beginning to talk to himself about some things he could do but to no avail. He took the jerky bag and stuffed it into his pockets and then led himself to the boulder once more, putting his hands on it. "Maybe I could spin upside down... no... that would be crazy... oh wait." He tapped against it, and then nodded to himself with a large grin. "That could work!" He began to laugh, a "shishi" had been heard from this stunning laugh, he would begin to place the boulder upon his back once more. "Lets try it again!"


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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 7:11 pm

You can only start at Genin or below (I'd recommend Genin right now, due to the fact that the Chuunin Exam's have just begun and it gives you an opportunity to boost right to Chuunin upon completion. By the way, come on the chatbox if you want.)
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 7:20 pm

Ok done.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 8:22 pm

If your only skill specialty is Taijutsu, you can't have all of the academy and Water walking.

P.S, It may not be a rule, but could you make this guy not a TOTAL Luffy rip off. Please?
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 8:23 pm

He has to have the academy techs and the tree and water walking to pass for chunin in my eyes, no other techs are fine but those, and also, he isn't a Luffy rip off, he doesnt have the ability to stretch. Can you please just grade my profile or get someone else to...
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 8:28 pm

Move the jutsu in that other post to here, under a jutsu catagory.

And if your only taijutsu (like Rock lee) you cannot have any kind of ninjutsu, E, D -239340 ranks or anything.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 8:30 pm

Dude, he doesn't have Lee's alignment, he chose to become a taijutsu specialist, again, if you can't understand that just get someone else to do the testing. I don't want to start an argument about something quintessential to my character.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 8:33 pm

Than post in your app under skill specialties that you have Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. Noone here is trying to start a fight.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Wed 13 Apr 2011, 11:13 pm

Actually he can do those E rank techs...you do not need to have a specialty as a specialty in order to use it. It will only be up to E-rank. Lee only knows Tai..but can miraculously walk on water. A ninjutsu tech, he knows it, all Academy techs.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Thu 14 Apr 2011, 12:00 am

Meh, still against it :x

But fine. BTW, I think he quit as opposed to the CB earlier.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Thu 14 Apr 2011, 8:33 am

Wow, Shin, read the rules: http://naruto-x.forumsmotion.com/t5988-how-many-skill-specialties-can-i-have
I had told everybody, including you, to read these new requirements/guidelines I had posted.

You can not go against anything that allows him to have those academy jutsu. And I agree with Davy, if you don't know anything, do not bother reviewing the app. Or at least ask somebody who knows, maybe another mod or a superior staff member.


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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Thu 14 Apr 2011, 5:38 pm

Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Fri 15 Apr 2011, 5:00 pm

Have you decided whether you were quitting or not?
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Sat 16 Apr 2011, 12:22 pm

I am.
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Sat 16 Apr 2011, 5:10 pm

Okay. Shall I delete this then?

Just asking in case you get approval for chuunin or whatever. ;)
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PostSubject: Re: Kobushi Kinniku Tekiou - DONE   Sun 17 Apr 2011, 10:50 am

Nah you can delete it.
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