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PostSubject: Marko Graziano   Thu 24 Mar 2011, 8:25 pm

~General Information~

Name: Marko Graziano

Nickname/Alias: None

Weight: 130

Height: 5'6

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Appearance:
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Marko is a dark-skinned male with silky black hair. He wears a plaid military cap, . Alongside his plaid cap is a plaid-colored, long-sleeved, collared shirt that is frequently seen hanging from his waist. Marko also wears a white tank top that is worn beneath an opened black, open-collared jacket. He also wears black pants and shoes. He also necklaces of different lengths; the longer one has a crystal-like red color and the shorter necklace appears to be similar to a dog tag necklace Marko wears jeans and a white tank top with a plaid colored shirt that is dark brown and creme brown, often tied around his waist. He also has a jacket he tends to wear over the tank top depending on perference at that moment

Personality: Marko is a somewhat egotistical person, but more so that he tries to see things in a optimistic light. Marko usually has a slightly joking and cool demeanor which he rarely loses due to any kind of panic, usually because even in a very serious situation Jacabo tends to have a slight sense of humor. Never acting immature at any time. When it comes to ideas, thoughts and actions he tends to have a somewhat bold and side Though this doesn't mean that he is an idiot, attacking wildly. He in fact will try his best to think threw some of his actions and understand what could come from what he does. To those that are his friends or allies he is usually pretty direct with his thoughts not usually holding back if he thinks they have to hear it. Towards enemies he on the other hand is usually a cold person. Showing no hesitation to kill them or for any other thing he needs. Often when he gets serious in fights or completely understands the weight of the situation he won't bother to even talk, staying silent throughout the fight in an attempt to be serious. Otherwise Marko tends to be an extremely headstrong person, who is very passionate about the things he does and sometimes hard to change his mind about something. Even though all of these things are part of him. True to a contractor everything about his is cut down to a cost benefit analysis. Making his loyalty at times questionable, as well as his true intentions


~Clan Information~

Clan Name: Graziano

Kyanseru- http://naruto-x.forumsmotion.com/t5981-graziano-clan#79157

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: Genin

Letter Rank: C

Village: Kirigakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu (tai at chuunin

Elemental Affinity: N/A

Special Characteristics: Special chakra given to him by clan.

~Jutsu~


Academy Jutsu-Assumed last I checked.

Name: (Shinwa-sei no jutsu
Rank: C-rank version
Element: N/A
Description: The signature jutsu of the Graziano clan. Causes the chakra of the user to explode out, and cover their body. Leading to higher defense, strength, and the other clan jutsu being stronger overall. This also unlocks the cancel and redirection abilities of the clan. The when in contact with the chakra a person suffers from adverse affects as well as inable to use their chakra. The chakra covering them is pure black, and with this jutsu can be used to make 1-2 simple things, such as arm blades etc. but to remain tangible must have contact with user.


Name: Chakra Hawks
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: The user will form 6 hawks from their special chakra. These are almost automated and can be controlled, user for recon etc. When coming down on a person, they explode. breathing in/being exposed the volotile chakra leads a person to become disoriented, vomiting double vision etc.

Name: Chakra chains
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: Chains can be formed from the ground or the user to bound a person. How they look depends but to break out needs chakra equal to how much was put into them. When in contact they face the adverse affects of the chakra


Name: Chakra Kunai/shuriken
Rank: C
Element:
Description: Kunai made from the chakra can be formed around Marko and launched out, he can also control them, and due to them being part of the adverse effects of the clan, should someone be hit they will suffer the same can explode leading to person being exposed by chakra

Name: Cancel/Redirection
Rank: C-S
Element:
Description: Their signature jutsu, this technique, allows them to send back attacks at the sender made of chakra. Given if it is element it will be more like the chakra in the attack is eaten away by the clan users. The chakra spend to block/cancel is = to the amount of chakra in the attack itself. The chakra carries the same, effects as getting hit with the chakra itself in any other situation

Name: Sense
Rank: C
Element:
Description: Members of the clan can disperse the chakra from their bodies, into the air. Like this the concentration is too low to affect anybody, however it allows them to sense disturbances as their chakra attacks others, allowing for a clear view of the area and those around to be seen in their min

Name: Chakra control
Rank: C
Element:
Description: Members of the clan are able too control the chakra in an intangible state. Where being hit will simply cause minor necrosis like effects on the body. It runs almost like fire, but can be solidified at any time. This can be done in streams waves arcs etc.

Name: Shunshinjutsu (Val)
Rank: C-S
Element:
Description: A style and a jutsu, they have created their own variant of shunshin no jutsu. They can leave spots of their chakra in an area. Only last until topic is over. Where they have been fired crashed etc. The bonus to this is that it doesn't lock them in a straight line that shunshin usually forces one to go. The clan members are able to transport to this spots of their concentrated chakra nearly at will. Extreme speeds being used, this technique can be used to dispatch multiple opponents at once and the like as they move. Each created spot costs a C-rank amount in chakra to create and can only be transported too once. This is not teleportation it is merely aimed shunshin



~History/RP Sample~

History/Background Story: Marko's life has been pretty simple. In fact the only thing that can truly be special for it is the new training he had to undergo for his clan. His life has been average, time at the academy average. His scores average, his parents treat him no better or worse than any others and he is leading a normal shinobi life. The only things that could possibly plague him through time, are the persecution his clan has faced in the past. However these fears have been easily quelled by his jounin teacher. All that can be worth mentioning about his past is that he truly hopes to eventually be the tsuchikage, and do good for his village, and those with KKG's treated unfairly. And so the story of his journey begins.

Roleplay Sample: http://naruto-x.forumsmotion.com/t5982-testing-a-canidate#79167


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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 31 Mar 2011, 5:08 pm

Once you get the other 2/2 on your Clan, I'll 1/2 Approve this. :D
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 07 Apr 2011, 10:11 pm

FULL APPROVAL OMFG
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Fri 08 Apr 2011, 7:34 am

Where is the second account for this character?
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Mon 07 Nov 2011, 8:57 pm

Moved to be re-approved and for minor re-formatting in accordance to the new rules.
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Fri 09 Dec 2011, 2:24 am

Shunshinjutsu - To me, this is simply a chakra version of the Flying Thunder God. Denied.
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Fri 09 Dec 2011, 12:41 pm

He's not teleporting though, simply using the shunshin or body flicker (moving extremely quickly), back to a spot he's already been in. Needs more of a drawback though. Like each spot requiring a c rank amount to create. And in that regard, each chakra spot could only create a c rank technique.

The whole clan seems pretty similar to my Uuindo clan (Seiyuuki pre-puppet state). Only reason I'm posting here. That and I'm bored. And a forum famer, in both title and spirit, figure that stands for something.


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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 5:19 pm

Edited, I apologize for any similarities. The clan was not modeled after yours nor did I know of it's existence before hand.
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 5:33 pm

Iwa is closed. You should change your village.

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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 5:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Thu 05 Jan 2012, 6:13 pm

Name: Cancel/Redirection

This doesn't make much sense at all. Explain a bit more on how you can absorb the chakra and redirect it back at them like that. Like your clan states, your chakra doesn't sit well with the chakra of others. So to actually be able to absorb the chakra, then launch it back, wouldn't make any sense with the clan at all. If anything, you'd somehow absorb the chakra, and the chakra would just get eaten away by your own chakra. You may be best off just removing that ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Marko Graziano   Sun 08 Jan 2012, 8:15 pm

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