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PostSubject: Hakaisha's Summons   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 11:03 pm

Name: Hitonami

Rank: A

Element: Earth

Personality: Hitonami Is a very driven Summon a very good order follower and will follow Hakaisha's orders no matter what. He is very set upon being under his masters influence there fore he does not listen to anyone else, including the other Rhinoceros summons.

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Weight: 1.2 tons

Height: 5ft

Specialty: Tai~Nin

Family: Rhinoceros

Description: Hakaisha found this rhino along with the other of his group all indifferent. Hitonami possessed the ability of being the fastest of the rhino group. And one of the sturdiest, thus making this a perfect mount for Hakaisha, getting him places faster.

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Name: Lightning Stampede
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: Usually when something hits the ground the earth molds in taking the impact especially for larger summons such as Hitonami. This jutsu allows him to touch ground without his feet sinking into the ground allowing him more speed.


Name: Doton Break
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the summon to create a large earth pillar to shoot from beneath the opponent. If this Jutsu makes contact it will deal a concussive blow. They will be knocked out for 2 posts.

Name: Earth Prison
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: With one stomp of the summon many earth pillars will shoot arround them making a prison from beneath and all around them leaving no room for escape. The opponent may not break through it with tai jutsu as it resists and natural force, for it has to be done with ninjutsu and only lightning can bring it down. Water will weaken it though for Tai jutsu based attacks to be successful. The user may use "doton break" to successfully knock out the opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 1:01 am

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 9:39 am

Name: Shoubu

Rank: A

Element: Fire

Personality: Shoubu like most of the Rhinoceros group is very loyal to Hakaisha. Listening to his every command and following it to the full extent. Shoubu is one to actually start havoc among the smaller things, if summoned he will immediately start his rampage unless told not to.

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Weight: 2,100

Height: 5ft

Specialty: Ninjutsu~Genjutsu

Family: Rhinoceros

Description: Shoubu is a rather fire starter, literally. Sending flames in all directions when summoned his goal is destruction other wise told not to by Hakaisha. This large beast can also use explosives to his advantage my summoning large explosive beasts at his side. He is also very skilled at genjutsu, dazzling foes with his fire Ninjutsu.

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Name: (C2) Explosive Clones
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu allows the summon to create three clones by his side that will be sent at the target and explode on contact or when the summon wants it to explode. The explosion is a c2 explosion, and can be very deadly at close range. The clones are not as fast as Shoubu, and have to trot before they can start moving at a fast pace.

Name: Katon Bust
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu allows the summon to create a large flame that destroys anything in its path, able to burn through stone after a short amount of time. The flame may also be sent as a ring of fire spreading away from the summon. (10-15 yards)

Name: Miraculous Flame
Rank: A
Element: Fire (Genjutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to emit a large figure in the sky made of fire it may be made towards the opponent or into the air to cause a bigger distraction. The Object may be anything such as a large rhino, phoenix, ect. Anyone who looks at the large fire will be immediately caught in the genjutsu, the genjutsu makes them think that the large fire hit them and as if they were burning away from third degree burns. Immense pain would simulate over the body, making the target cringe and fall to the ground unable to move.


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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 1:14 pm

No S-rank for an A-rank summon.

(C4) Explosive Clones,

Do you know how powerful a C4 explosion is in Naruto Universe?


Katon Bust,

Give a specific range that it can reach.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 2:01 pm

Lkitty wrote:
No S-rank for an A-rank summon.

(C4) Explosive Clones,

Do you know how powerful a C4 explosion is in Naruto Universe?


Katon Bust,

Give a specific range that it can reach.

Edited Katon Bust.

And changed the rank of Miraculous flame. I was thinking that an A rank Summon may perform 1 S rank jutsu.

And yes I know how big the explosion is.

Thus me making it.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 6:59 pm

Katon bust approved.

Then you do know that the word C4 meant it can destroy one whole village in one explosion.

Immense pain would simulate over the body, making the target cringe and fall to the ground unable to move.

Remove that from Miraculous Flame, Genjutsu cannot affect the physical body. Only the Mental.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 9:31 pm

Lkitty wrote:
Katon bust approved.

Then you do know that the word C4 meant it can destroy one whole village in one explosion.

Immense pain would simulate over the body, making the target cringe and fall to the ground unable to move.

Remove that from Miraculous Flame, Genjutsu cannot affect the physical body. Only the Mental.


1. For Miraculous Flame it says "Simulate" As in there mind makes them think there in pain and makes them cringe.

2. I shall change it to C2.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 9:38 pm

Aye...approved then.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 10:44 pm

Unapproved.

That katon jutsu is classified as a genjutsu, or just the flames?

By the way, you never changed it to C2 (the description, not the title). I just re-analyzed that jutsu and noticed it still said C4.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 11:35 pm

The Katon jutsu is just a Genjutsu. It can't do any harm
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Tue 16 Nov 2010, 11:52 pm

Well i didn't even notice that, I edited the description once again, it now says c2.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Summons   Wed 17 Nov 2010, 7:31 am

Drawback for the explosive clones would be nice.
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