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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 7:08 pm

Kumo And Kiri are both closed...

Please choose a different village, or Akatsuki, doesn't matter.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 7:33 pm

-You can't start as Missing nin.

-You can't start as Akatsuki member unless you have permission from Vizer.

-Large Chakra pools is a no-no. Remove it.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 7:36 pm

POSTED EDITED WHATEVER
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 7:46 pm



Now Time for jutsus :D

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• Name: Clone Art: Fire Clone
• Rank: C
• Classification: Bushinjutsu/Ninjutsu
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to create a clone with the elemental properties of fire, making the clone physical. Unlike regular Bushin clones, this clone can fight, survive and live without the influence of the user. However, if little chakra is put into the clone, the clone will vanish with a few attacks. When the clone vanishes the clone delivers a slight burning sensation where the opponent attacked with.

• Name: Clone Art: Lightning Clone
• Rank: B
• Classification: Bushinjutsu/Ninjutsu
• Element: Raiton
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to create a clone with the elemental properties of lightning, making the clone physical. Unlike regular Bushin clones, this clone can fight, survive and live without the influence of the user. However, if little chakra is put into the clone, the clone will vanish with a few attacks. The properties of this technique are somewhat different, it seems to use more than a clones worth of chakra as well as give the user an electrical shock when they vanish.

I want a time limit on both of these due to them being able to really have there own mind set and attack without the users command.Pretty strong for there rank so add a post limit for how long they last.

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• Name: Chakra Art: Flammable Chakra Technique
• Rank: B
• Classification:
• Element:
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to expel a thick chakra fog, the fog however is flammable. This technique is created by altering the properties of your chakra as the chakra expels itself. When combined with a Katon Style attack the fire is a lot stronger, when Fuuton is added to the Katon then the attack could be fatal. When this technique is channeled properly, then the mist can be expelled as you are performing a Katon technique to increase the affect, however chakra consumption is not changed because it is just a faster way of producing it.



Either further explain how you emit this fog, or completely delete it because a chakra fog is made of chakra. Meaning you would lose ALOT of chakra by using this jutsu.

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• Name: Chakra Art: Stealing Technique
• Rank: A
• Classification:
• Element:
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to absorb the chakra from one’s body after death, because it is known that a body releases all its chakra during death, one can use that knowledge to their advantage. This technique can only be used within 48 hours after ones death and this technique can only absorb up to 35% of their chakra, this is usually just if the users chakra runs low and is typically not performed often.

DENIED
Reason: You can easily gmod with this and kill Npc's during fights and steal there chakra.

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• Name: Fire Style: Dehydration Technique
• Rank: C
• Classification:
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique focuses on dehydrating an area, making it harder to fight. This technique releases fire at an equal rate to the water in the air, completely dehydrating it, but at the same time making the air more flammable, causing a chain reaction.
Denied..

Your making air flammable. No, just no.

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• Name: Fire Style: Flame Throwing Technique
• Rank: C
• Classification:
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: Similar to the Fireball technique, this technique allows the user to expel fire from their mouth by churning the chakra in their gullet. However, unlike the Fireball technique, this technique can last till the user runs out of chakra. This technique is similar in the way that is can be shot in bursts.

• Name: Fire Style: Fire Shower
• Rank: C
• Classification:
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to use the Flame Throwing technique to make it rain fire by shooting the fire in bursts in the air. The fire will usually gain power by absorbing more oxygen and such.

• Name: Fire Style: Wolf Traced Flames
• Rank: B
• Classification:
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: This simple fire technique allows the user to expel fire out like a fireball however the fire then molds into a wolf and has the ability to chase the opponent. Up to two can be created per use

Post limits on all of these, and Fire Shower should be B-A rank.



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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 7:50 pm

Change the title of this..please do not use profanity in your titles.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Mon 15 Nov 2010, 8:58 pm

• Name: Clone Art: Exploding Clone Technique
• Rank: B
• Classification: Bushinjutsu
• Element: -
• Requirements: A clone
• Description: This technique allows the user to control the substance inside the clone on a different level by allowing the user to explode the substance, this cannot be done with regular bushin clones however, it can be done with element based clones or shadow clones.

• Name: Clone Art: Fire Clone
• Rank: C
• Classification: Bushinjutsu/Ninjutsu
• Element: Katon
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to create a clone with the elemental properties of fire, making the clone physical. Unlike regular Bushin clones, this clone can fight, survive and live without the influence of the user. However, if little chakra is put into the clone, the clone will vanish with a few attacks. When the clone vanishes the clone delivers a slight burning sensation where the opponent attacked with.

• Name: Clone Art: Lightning Clone
• Rank: B
• Classification: Bushinjutsu/Ninjutsu
• Element: Raiton
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to create a clone with the elemental properties of lightning, making the clone physical. Unlike regular Bushin clones, this clone can fight, survive and live without the influence of the user. However, if little chakra is put into the clone, the clone will vanish with a few attacks. The properties of this technique are somewhat different, it seems to use more than a clones worth of chakra as well as give the user an electrical shock when they vanish.

------- These are all A ranked.



• Name: Chakra Art: Stealing Technique
• Rank: A
• Classification:
• Element:
• Requirements:
• Description: This technique allows the user to absorb the chakra from one’s body after death, because it is known that a body releases all its chakra during death, one can use that knowledge to their advantage. This technique can only be used within 48 hours after ones death and this technique can only absorb up to 35% of their chakra, this is usually just if the users chakra runs low and is typically not performed often.

------I am sure the dead no longer have chakra, seeing as when a person's tenketsu points are all closed that they die. So this technique isn't really possible to take chakra from a dead person. Denied.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Tue 07 Dec 2010, 8:13 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Wed 08 Dec 2010, 1:21 am

Remove the speed characteristic..no one starts off with that.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Wed 08 Dec 2010, 6:30 pm

I fixed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Wed 08 Dec 2010, 7:10 pm

Your rank isn't Jounin if you have no village. Your rank should be Akatsuki and your village should be the village you came from..crossed out or ex.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Thu 09 Dec 2010, 8:35 am

You have to post your clan in the creations section, so it gets approved there.
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PostSubject: Re: Naethyn Kaodaochi   Thu 09 Dec 2010, 12:00 pm

Please use the site jutsu template before I reevaluate your jutsus again.
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