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PostSubject: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 12:10 pm

Non Elemental:
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Doton Jutsus:
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Taijutsu:
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Raiton:

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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 1:08 pm

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Name: Ninpou • Netsushi [Ninja Art • Thermal Vision].
Rank: C.
Element: None.
Description: By completing hand seals and focusing chakra to their eyes, the user's sight is changed so that they can see temperatures of objects as colors rather than their normal eyesight. With hot objects producing a red color and cold objects producing a blue color, this is useful when the user is trying to find a hiding opponent or such but also has the downfall of losing depth perception and environmental details.

- Needs a post duration.

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Name:Earth Signals
Rank:C-S
Element:Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the person to hear steps that other's cant hear. The user must put their ear on the ground floor and they can hear footsteps from the earth. At C-Rank you can hear up to 1 mile, C-Rank is 2 miles, B-Rank is 3 miles, A-Rank is 4 miles and S-Rank Miles is 5 miles. Other things may come into your ear at C-Rank but when the jutsu become's higher the more you can focus on the signal you want.

-You don't have Ninjutsu as a specialty so you can have only C ranked jutsu; remove this jutsu.

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Name: Henjiru Daichi, Change into Earth
Rank: C-A
Element: Doton
Description: With use of this jutsu a ninja is able to merge with the earth below them but is slightly visible as a different colour in the location of the ninja. The colour resembles that of the ninja’s natural hair colour. The ninja is able to move without disturbing the earth at all, speed is reduced by twenty percent. The ninja must end the jutsu and fully materialize themselves to do something such as attack.
B rank ninja have no colour effect thus is not visible with normal ninja eyes. A rank Ninja are able to materialize parts of them without ending the jutsu such as an arm to attack or hold the target in place. The higher ranks do not require more chakra than other C rank jutsu to perform but higher level of chakra control.

-Same with above.

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Name: Dosei Tsume, Earth Claws
Rank: C-S
Element: Doton
Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seal and place their hands on the ground, the earth then crawls up the hands and forms claws made of hardened earth around the entire hand and over the back of the wrist. The claws increase strength and can shred targets apart.
As the ninja increases in rank so can the cutting strength of claws. Skin and muscle at C, bones and soft metals at B, harder metals at A, and cut through metal and bodily limbs at S Rank. Kairu being a member of the Inuzuka Clan also forms the earth around hit feet and half way up his shin.

-Same with above.


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Name: Raiton Break
Rank: B-S
Element: Raiton
Description: Without movement the user may release a large torrent of lightning from his body, going in all directions like a static field. The user is not effected by it but anyone else who is hit by this wave will become paralyzed, and unable to think correctly nor see well. The user may also control its direction by lifting there hand and pointing. Paralysis lasts for 3 posts.

-Same with above.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 1:32 pm

Fixed, they all should have been C rank, my apologies.

Edited to your requests.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 2:01 pm

Name: Laughter of Loki
Rank: E
Element: None
Description: The user causes their voice to rebound off every available surface in an enclosed area, making it difficult to locate the location of the voice. This jutsu does not function in an area that is open.

That would require the element sound

Name: Innocent Rain Drops
Rank: C
Element: Any
Description: A ninja will gather a handful of senbon and charge them with pure chakra. The senbon will then be thrown into the air. 3 posts later, they will fall down as regular looking rain drops, though their metallic sheen is a giveaway for ninja who are experienced with rain and water. Each senbon is charged with chakra and will hit an opponent and deliver a slight pain as the chakra rushes out. Repeated strikes will cause more serious effects, similar to a speed up acid rain, eventually corroding the flesh off an opponent within 5 posts.

Remove that. That would be a much higher jutsu then C, and that is a ninjutsu. Plus to disguise them as raindrops you would nee the water element, which you don't have either

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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 2:46 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 7:12 pm

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Name:Earth Signals
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the person to hear steps that other's cant hear. The user must put their ear on the ground floor and they can hear footsteps from the earth. At C-Rank you can hear up to 1 mile, C-Rank is 2 miles, B-Rank is 3 miles, A-Rank is 4 miles and S-Rank Miles is 5 miles. Other things may come into your ear at C-Rank but when the jutsu become's higher the more you can focus on the signal you want.

-Edit the jutsu, you just changed the rank.

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Name: Dosei Tsume, Earth Claws
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seal and place their hands on the ground, the earth then crawls up the hands and forms claws made of hardened earth around the entire hand and over the back of the wrist. The claws increase strength and can shred targets apart.
As the ninja increases in rank so can the cutting strength of claws. Skin and muscle at C, bones and soft metals at B, harder metals at A, and cut through metal and bodily limbs at S Rank. Kairu being a member of the Inuzuka Clan also forms the earth around hit feet and half way up his shin.

-Same with above.

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Name: Raiton Break
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Without movement the user may release a large torrent of lightning from his body, going in all directions like a static field. The user is not effected by it but anyone else who is hit by this wave will become paralyzed, and unable to think correctly nor see well. The user may also control its direction by lifting there hand and pointing. Paralysis lasts for 3 posts.

-Too powerful for a C Ranked jutsu; Remove it.

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Name: Lightning Flurry
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the users hands, and feet to charge up with lightning. If the user hits someone with the lightning filled hands and feet it will paralyze the area in which they hit them at for 2 posts.

Name: Lightning Bolt
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the user to inflict shocks of lightning to there muscles, thus making the muscles hyper active. Once this short procedure has been completed the user will be a lot faster then he was before, he will overall move, and attack 4x times faster then he originally was. This jutsu lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Raiton Break
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: Without movement the user may release a large torrent of lightning from his body, going in all directions like a static field. The user is not effected by it but anyone else who is hit by this wave will become paralyzed, and unable to think correctly nor see well. The user may also control its direction by lifting there hand and pointing.

-Those jutsu are not Taijutsu, they are Ninjutsu; Remove them. And you already have the last one. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 8:27 pm

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Name:Earth Signals
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the person to hear steps that other's cant hear. The user must put their ear on the ground floor and they can hear footsteps from the earth. At C-Rank you can hear up to 1 mile, C-Rank is 2 miles, B-Rank is 3 miles, A-Rank is 4 miles and S-Rank Miles is 5 miles. Other things may come into your ear at C-Rank but when the jutsu become's higher the more you can focus on the signal you want.

Name: Dosei Tsume, Earth Claws
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Description: The ninja will do the necessary hand seal and place their hands on the ground, the earth then crawls up the hands and forms claws made of hardened earth around the entire hand and over the back of the wrist. The claws increase strength and can shred targets apart.
As the ninja increases in rank so can the cutting strength of claws. Skin and muscle at C, bones and soft metals at B, harder metals at A, and cut through metal and bodily limbs at S Rank. Kairu being a member of the Inuzuka Clan also forms the earth around hit feet and half way up his shin.


Mmkay, These Jutsus are fine for me to use, 1 i don't have ninjutsu no, thus being C rank. 2 i have Earth as an element.

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Name: Lightning Flurry
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the users hands, and feet to charge up with lightning. If the user hits someone with the lightning filled hands and feet it will paralyze the area in which they hit them at for 2 posts.

Name: Lightning Bolt
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the user to inflict shocks of lightning to there muscles, thus making the muscles hyper active. Once this short procedure has been completed the user will be a lot faster then he was before, he will overall move, and attack 4x times faster then he originally was. This jutsu lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Raiton Break
Rank: B
Element: Raiton
Description: Without movement the user may release a large torrent of lightning from his body, going in all directions like a static field. The user is not effected by it but anyone else who is hit by this wave will become paralyzed, and unable to think correctly nor see well. The user may also control its direction by lifting there hand and pointing.

I will get rid of Raiton Break since it is, "Too Powerful". The other ones have to be used with Tai Jutsu like qualities. Such as punching, and punching faster.





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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 8:44 pm

Even so the mere fact that you're using an element makes it partly Ninjutsu, so that means you cannot use it since you're only allowed upto C-Rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 9:41 pm

Fine edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Sat 06 Nov 2010, 5:01 am

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Name: Raiton Break
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: Without movement the user may release a large torrent of lightning from his body, going in all directions like a static field. The user is not effected by it but anyone else who is hit by this wave will become paralyzed, and unable to think correctly nor see well. The user may also control its direction by lifting there hand and pointing.

-You already have this jutsu. In the 'Raiton' spoiler.

-I meant edit the Jutsu; as in delete anything that says 'At B Rank the user can... At A Rank the user can...' that's what I meant.

The rest looks good.

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Sun 07 Nov 2010, 10:08 am

Mmkay.

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Mon 08 Nov 2010, 9:02 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Mon 08 Nov 2010, 10:50 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Hakaisha's Jutsus   Fri 19 Nov 2010, 10:27 pm

UNAPPROVED.

I realized you've used the same jutsus on Akumu Kaguya.

Name: Iron Strength
Rank: A
Element: -
Description: This Jutsu alows the user to focus chakra all along the muscles, not making them bigger but making them a lot stronger. The user is much stronger, and way more durable. There outside dexterity is as strong, and tough as iron, allowing them to take multiple hits without being phased. This also allows the user to move 5x faster as well due to the stronger chakra enhanced muscles. This jutsu lasts 5 posts.

5 times? No. And add a cooldown.


Name: Lightning Flurry
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the users hands, and feet to charge up with lightning. If the user hits someone with the lightning filled hands and feet it will paralyze the area in which they hit them at for 2 posts.

Duration?


Name: Lightning Bolt
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu allows the user to inflict shocks of lightning to there muscles, thus making the muscles hyper active. Once this short procedure has been completed the user will be a lot faster then he was before, he will overall move, and attack 4x times faster then he originally was. This jutsu lasts for 3 posts.

4 times faster for a C-rank? No. Denied.

Please fix this 3 jutsus, the same way they we're questioned in Akumu's app.
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