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PostSubject: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 03 Nov 2010, 4:53 pm

Name: 4 Binding Lightning Rods
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: After doing the required hand seals, 4 long rods made of static lightning will appear in the air above the target, all floating at an angle, but pointing directly to the target. At Revy's command, the rods will zip down, piercing the target with great force, holding them in place, and possible killing them.

Name: 8 Binding Lightning Rods
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: This is a much stronger version of the 4 Binding Lightning Rods. 8 Rods will appear in the air above the target, floating at an angle, but all pointing towards the target. At Revy's will, the rods will zip down, piercing the target, holding them to the ground. The rods also have a chance of holding them in place, if it doesn't kill them.

Name: Static Interruption
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: After doing a single hand seal, a wave, that appears to look like a sound wave will shoot out from Revy, in a complete circle around her, spreading up to 5 miles wide, surrounding Revy at all times. In that area, any type of electrical device, for communication, or anything that has long range communication, and even sometimes weapons with machine like properties, will short circuit, malfunction, or become completely unusable.

Name: Flash Bang
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: After focusing a small amount of chakra into a certain area, Revy will perform a single hand seal, and that spot will flash incredibly bright. This is used commonly to distract the enemy, or make quick escaped. It will light the entire area up with a incredibly bright light for 2 posts after it has been set off.

Name: Shattering Thunder
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Name: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: By manipulating lightning chakra into the dominant hand, the user can make the lightning expand to can create the form of a hound. The hound-shape remains connected to the user's hand with a bolt of lightning, allowing them to control it during its attack.

Name: Lightning Tornado
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: The user will do the required hand seals then hold 1 hand to the sky sending a portion of chakra up, after so, a very thick and large bolt of lightning from the sky will shoot down in front of them, it will form a mini tornado made of lightning and will spin at the enemy with incredible spinning speed. (Can be made stationary before the tornado is created for up to 5 posts)

Name: Lightning Release Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

Name: Lightning Destruction
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of lightning that cuts through the ground towards the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangular figure with the base in front of the user and the tip headed towards the opponent. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates with enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

Name: Flash Strike
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Upon activation of this Jutsu, Revy will surge lightning chakra into her blade, at her will on swing, a crescent moon like shape of lightning will shoot out and fly at the targeted area, the slashes are a little large and in the shape of a half moon, each slash that sends out the attack will give off a bright flash as it comes out of the blade for a split second, not bright enough to blind the enemy, just great as a distraction or surprise. This will stay active for 7 posts, or until canceled by the user.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 5:33 am

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Name: Static Interruption
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description: After doing a single hand seal, a wave, that appears to look like a sound wave will shoot out from Revy, in a complete circle around her, spreading up to 10 miles wide, surrounding Revy at all times. In that area, any type of electrical device, for communication, or anything that has long range communication, and even sometimes weapons with machine like properties, will short circuit, malfunction, or become completely unusable.

-10 miles is too much; Make it 5.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 6:05 am

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Tue 14 Dec 2010, 4:09 pm

Name: Force Lightning
Rank: S
Element: Lightning
Description: A very powerful Jutsu in Revy's arsenal, and dangerous one. The Force Lightning Technique was developed back during a time when the gods held wars of power. Although, until this day it was never perfected, or seen used by the hands of a mere human. Revy will extend one hand forward, and the other hand forward, but not as far, and position herself as if she were about to be hit by something big. After positioning herself, she will bend her fingers in, as if she were holding some type of ball. Doing so will generate a ball of blue lightning, in front of both of her hands, though not close enough to be touching her. The balls are controlled lightning, but what happens next is even more devastating. Almost instantly after, the lightning from the balls are shot out forward, in a jet of blue lightning. A constant stream of lightning that continuously shocks and rips through anything up to 30 feet in front of Revy. The jets of lightning are not controlled in movement by Revy, at least until they lock onto someone. The lightning will continue to whiplash destroying everything in front of her until it makes contact with something that can continuously channel the jets. Such as metal, or a body. Even medal headbands, and objects inside of peoples bags, making this a devastating Jutsu. Although it will never lash back at Revy because of it being controlled at her hands, it does have deadly risks. The power of the Lightning is strong enough to make someone bend at her will, if it doesn't kill them. If it hold's onto them, Revy can manipulate the way they move to her will, although doing that puts a big strain on herself. This also meaning that if someone is directly hit by this, they are unable to move because of the continuous shocks of lightning. The lightning can be incredibly hard to control for long periods of time, and it can even push Revy back, and drag her around if she hold's it for to long. This jutsu can be held active for a maximum of 8 posts. When this Jutsu is finished, Revy is unable to use any Jutsu for 3 posts following the drop of this Jutsu. But if canceled within 7 posts of using it, this does not apply. Once activated, the prolonged effect of this Jutsu automatically activates. The prolonged effect is that Revy will be able to drop the jutsu at an instant, if she needs to move or dodge an attack, then pick it up right away at an instant once again, and be able to do this repeatedly as long as the prolonged effect is activated. The prolonged effect lasts the same amount of time as the regular Jutsu itself. While under the prolonged effect, no Jutsu can be used until it is completely over, or canceled, excluding a few. (8 post cooldown)

Name: Force Lightning Explosion
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: The force lightning explosion technique was developed by accident, during Revy's training with the Force Lightning jutsu. Whenever the jutsu got out of control, she would abandon it by launching the balls of lightning that float in front of her hands. This jutsu is one of the few Jutsu that may be used within the prolonged effect of the Force Lightning Jutsu. Revy will be able to launch the balls of Lightning up to 4 times. One, or both balls may be launched at once, and if only one is launched, Revy will be unable to create another until the second has been launched. Although she will be able to reuse the ball that isn't launched in case she needs to attack again between the time that both balls are launched. Only it would cut the width of the attack in half, since only one hand is being used. If a launched ball makes contact with something capable of stopping it, or someone, it will create an explosion of lightning that continuously channel waves of lightning in the explosion, for about 2 seconds before the explosion calms down. The power of this jutsu depends on how much the Force Lightning Jutsu has been used. If revy has used her force lightning for more then 6 posts, the effects of this jutsu are weakened. Making the explosion only as big as 10 paper bomb tags. If any less, the explosion will be the size of 15 paper bomb tags. This technique uses very little chakra.

Name: Twin Fang Devastating Ball
Rank: B – A
Element: Lightning
Description: By gathering lightning chakra between her twin Lightning Fangs, Revy can create a ball of powerful lightning, and launch it at her target. The ball is capable of brute force, and is able to break rock, as well as emit an electrical force into what it touches. The ball is about the size of a beach ball. If used on a more powerful scale, it is capable of pure destruction. When used on a more powerful scale, instead of simply putting the lightning chakra between her blades, Revy sends the chakra into the air, creating many strikes of lightning, that strike down. Most of the lightning will be directed towards the blades, and strike them. The other, wild lightning will just strike down; hitting areas around Revy, The lightning that strikes the blades will form a very large ball that can be launched at the target. This lightning can only create minor shocks. The enlarged ball is capable of cutting through trees when thrown. On it's way to the target, it has immense destructive force in a 20 ft radius in front of revy, and keeps going for 50 ft, before it dies out and disappears. On it's way to it's target. The force of the ball thrown is enough damage the structure of a building to the point of collapse on impact. The electricity produced is about equal to any other lightning jutsu of its rank.

Name: Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Drawing her two swords together, Revy will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon her body. The current will be contained within and around Revy's form. She will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon's head and will cover the area in front of her. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with her foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Name: Lightning Strike Armor
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: By combining her twin swords at their hilts and rotating them, Revy can use this jutsu to surround herself with electricity. The intense electric field protects her by electrocuting anyone who makes contact with it, but only works for one attack. This armor seems very strong as it is capable of standing up to Rock Lee's Drunken Fist. The lightning that surrounds her covers her from head to toe, as if it were a shell. Revy will be in the center, unseen. The armor will stay active for 7 posts if no attack is made.

Name: Lightning Burial: Banquet Of Lightning
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: Using her twin swords, Revy can create several thunderbolts that cut through the ground until they hit the enemy. The bolts are incredibly in size, and are capable of mass destruction as they cut through the ground. They are also capable of great speeds, and are able to bend at Revy's will. When this is used, lightning will also form an armor around Revy, very similar to the Lightning Strike Armor Technique.

Name: Fangs Of Lightning
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: By drawing together her twin swords, Revy can send an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing her to create lightning strikes in any desired location. Up to 5 strikes.

Natural Ability

Using her swords, Revy could use powerful long-distance lightning abilities more easily than normal lightning jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 4:25 am

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 8:22 am

Force Lightning, that is S-Rank. I made the same kind of jutsu in the past, but removed it in my update since I kind of felt that it was too OP.

Twin Fang Devastating Ball, for a jutsu with only a B-A rank which can take a limb of a bijuu? No. Denied. That is OP.

Lightning Dragon Tornado, spinning? I think that will make your character dizzy for a decent while.

Lightning Strike Armor, understand that this can only defend against a jutsu of the same rank, and against its counter element which is wind it is weaker.

Lightning Burial: Banquet Of Lightning, I dont think its impossible to control it once you've already released it. Give me an example.

Fangs Of Lightning, even if you are able to send lightning chakra to the clouds you do not control the clouds for you to have them strike lightning.

Death Of The Lightning God, unless this is an ability from a bijuu. I wont allow changing of body composition just like that.

About the Natural Ability, I dont think natural lightning can be bend by a human. I need opinions.
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 2:52 pm

How is force lightning an S rank?

The twin fang devastating ball can wound the limb of a weaker Bijuu. It's a big ball of lightning, don't expect to just blow it off when hit by something like that. (Talis edited the jutsu into something more suitable for the site, i didn't notice it said "take" the limb)

Lightning dragon tornado is a cannon Jutsu, and it does not make you dizzy after use. That much has been proven.

Banquet of lightning is a cannon jutsu, it's been proven possible when Raiga used it to kill Naruto's shadow clones. The first 2 he shoots curve around, then he shoots 2 at once.

Fangs of lightning once again is a cannon jutsu used with the Lightning Fangs. The legendary swords i have? The lightning fangs are what allow me to do lightning techniques far greater then someone without them could.

For the natural ability, I'm not bending natural lightning. I absorb a bolt of lightning that attracts to my Lightning Fangs (Just like a lightning rod herpderp), and adsorb it as an energy supply.

THE LIGHTNING FANGS KITSUKE

The fangs allow me to do incredibly long range lightning abilities, and they makes lightning jutsu incredibly easy for me to do. Including do stuff someone without them couldn't do.


And your hell of one to talk about OP

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 6:37 pm

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Name: Force Lightning
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: A very powerful Jutsu in Revy's arsenal, and dangerous one. The Force Lightning Technique was developed back during a time when she ruled, well known as the leader of Akatsuki. Although, until this day it was never perfected. There are 2 ways to activate this Jutsu. One, Revy will extend one hand forward, and the other hand forward, but not as far, and position herself as if she were about to be hit by something big. After positioning herself, she will bend her fingers in, as if she were holding some type of ball. Doing so will generate a ball of blue lightning, in front of both of her hands, though not close enough to be touching her. The balls are controlled lightning, but what happens next is even more devastating. Almost instantly after, the lightning from the balls are shot out forward, in a jet of blue lightning. A constant stream of lightning that continuously shocks and rips through anything up to 30 feet in front of Revy. The jets of lightning are not controlled in movement by Revy, at least until they lock onto someone. The lightning will continue to whiplash destroying everything in front of her until it makes contact with something that can continuously channel the jets. Such as metal, or a body. Even medal headbands, and objects inside of peoples bags, making this a devastating Jutsu. Although it will never lash back at Revy because of it being controlled at her hands, it does have deadly risks. The power of the Lightning is strong enough to make someone bend at her will, if it doesn't kill them. If it hold's onto them, Revy can manipulate the way they move to her will, although doing that puts a big strain on herself. This also meaning that if someone is directly hit by this, they are unable to move because of the continuous shocks of lightning. The lightning can be incredibly hard to control for long periods of time, and it can even push Revy back, and drag her around if she hold's it for to long. This jutsu can be held active for a maximum of 10 posts. When this Jutsu is finished, Revy is unable to use any Jutsu for 3 posts following the drop of this Jutsu. But if canceled within 7 posts of using it, this does not apply.

-S Rank. I give a Disapproval For all time. This can also be considered Magnetism. Because of...

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The jets of lightning are not controlled in movement by Revy, at least until they lock onto someone. The lightning will continue to whiplash destroying everything in front of her until it makes contact with something that can continuously channel the jets. Such as metal, or a body. Even medal headbands, and objects inside of peoples bags, making this a devastating Jutsu

That's considered using Magnetism. Lightning as a base elemental release cannot attract themselves to metal objects unless they are Magnets themselves. So No.

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Name: Twin Fang Devastating Ball
Rank: B – A (A-S)
Element: Lightning
Description: By gathering lightning chakra between her twin Lightning Fangs, Revy can create a ball of powerful lightning, and launch it at her target. The ball is capable of brute force, and is able to break rock, as well as emit an electrical force into what it touches. The ball is about the size of a beach ball. If used on a more powerful scale, it is capable of pure destruction. When used on a more powerful scale, instead of simply putting the lightning chakra between her blades, Revy sends the chakra into the air, creating many strikes of lightning, that strike down. Most of the lightning will be directed towards the blades, and strike them. The other, wild lightning will just strike down; hitting areas around Revy, The lightning that strikes the blades will form a very large ball that can be launched at the target. This lightning can only create minor shocks. The enlarged ball is capable of cutting through trees when thrown. On it's way to the target, it has immense destructive force in a 20 ft radius in front of revy, and keeps going for 50 ft, before it dies out and disappears. On it's way to it's target. The force of the ball can have an impact force high enough to wound a limb of a bijuu, this mean’s it could damage the structure of a building to the point of collapse. The electricity produced is about equal to any other lightning jutsu of its rank.

-This is also considered an Epically OP S rank Jutsu. Reasons?

• This would take a whole shit load of chakra to be able to do what you'll be thinking of doing, maybe around twice the amount of a normal shinobi Sannin could handle.

• This is Awfully like a Sword version of my Ranmyaku Shitsunen without the control. Also with a controlling of lightning into a ball? I should've said this about the last Jutsu. If you can make a clean ball of Lightning, your using a Kekkei Genkai. >.> If it's a whole mass of Lightning collided together, it would explode from all the points acting together at once. Lightning as it's own base, I would recommend not touching. Lightning is an unstable element and someone can't just "Control it" Without knowing the proper knowledge of how 'Real' Lightning and 'Chakra' Lightning works as a whole. So tone it DOWN.

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Name: Lightning Dragon Tornado
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: Drawing her two swords together, Revy will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon her body. The current will be contained within and around Revy's form. She will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon's head and will cover the area in front of her. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with her foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

-Hm. Canon Jutsu or not. No. You'd have to spin at least 13-17mph in order to get some friction in the air to create lightning chakra in the air. Hell. Kakashi has to concentrate his chakra to use his Raikiri and Chidori and move quickly in order to keep it. Then again, he took training with it.

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Name: Lightning Strike Armor
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: By combining her twin swords at their hilts and rotating them, Revy can use this jutsu to surround herself with electricity. The intense electric field protects her by electrocuting anyone who makes contact with it, but only works for one attack. This armor seems very strong as it is capable of standing up to Rock Lee's Drunken Fist. The lightning that surrounds her covers her from head to toe, as if it were a shell. Revy will be in the center, unseen.

-B Rank.

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Name: Lightning Burial: Banquet Of Lightning
Rank: A
Element: Lightning
Description: Using her twin swords, Revy can create several thunderbolts that cut through the ground until they hit the enemy. The bolts are incredibly in size, and are capable of mass destruction as they cut through the ground. They are also capable of great speeds, and are able to bend at Revy's will. When this is used, lightning will also form an armor around Revy, very similar to the Lightning Strike Armor Technique.

- No Manipulating them. They go as their directed when shot out of the swords.

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Name: Fangs Of Lightning
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: By drawing together her twin swords, Revy can send an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing her to create lightning strikes in any desired location. Up to 5 strikes.

-Again. Stop it. >> Remove this. Not approving it, even if it is Canon Jutsu. Desired Location is a No-no. You can PREDICT where it might hit, depending on where the cloud is positioned, how much mass it has and how much of the chakra he put into the cloud.

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Name: Death Of The Lightning God
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description: This jutsu is mostly used when Revy needs to flee. Without any hand seals, chakra will quickly stretch out into the sky, creating large bolts of lightning which strike down rapidly around Revy. They begin to form a solid ball of lightning around her, blinding everyone from her. The ball will begin to shrink slightly, then disperse into what looks like flakes of lightning, and travel high into the air. When it disperses, revy will be gone as well. Becoming the lightning itself. It will allow her to return to a safe place quickly. Once at the chosen location, the lightning will take the form of a human, and revy will form again. After using this, she will be unable to mold her chakra for 5 posts, and will need time to rest.

-Hand Signs Required.

-No Fast as Lightning speed.


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Natural Ability

Using her swords, Revy could use powerful long-distance lightning abilities more easily than normal lightning jutsu. She could also use nature lightning as a power source, and as long as she has access to it, she can battle continuously without feeling tired. At the price of taking minor lightning damage every time she took in lightning.

-Never on your life.
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 7:12 pm

Saruno, you should read through the jutsu a few times before you post something about them

Force lightning - I'm not touching the lightning. It's formed in front of my hands. And no, it's not considered magnetism. No where does it say it's guided to the metal on the ninja. It says IF IT HITS THE METAL. I'll edit it, and change it's rank.

Twing Fang Ball - THe ball is formed between the blades of the Lightning Fangs. I'm NOT TOUCHING IT. I'll tone it down though, but you outta get your eyes checked.

Lightning Dragon - I'm just flat out ignoring you on this. It's a cannon jutsu. Proven possible in the naruto universe, the way it is.

Lightning Burial - They move incredibly fast, meaning the manipulation of them isn't that good. The mose i'd be able to do is make one bend to the side slightly, thats it. Which has been proven possible in the anime, and since it's a cannon jutsu used with the Lightning Fangs. Thats like saying you cant throw a curve ball in baseball.

Fangs of Lightning - It's USING MY CHAKRA TO CREATE BOLTS OF LIGHTNING THAT I COMMAND TO STRIKE IN A DESIRED AREA. IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH CLOUDS AND NATURAL LIGHTNING. The Lightning Fangs allow me to use incredibly long range lightning jutsu with ease. Not all lightning that comes from the sky is natural.

I'll edit the lightning god jutsu. And as for the natural ability, why not? It was something Raiga was able to do. I'm not manipulating natural lightning or anything. I'm being an idiot playing with metal swords on a high area, and watching as the lightning strikes my swords. WHen that happens, i absorb the lightning as a type of energy. ANd don't even try to bring up the argument that it would kill me, because the lightning fangs are liek lightning rods. The blades can channel lightning easily.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 7:39 pm

Edited them. And for the natural ability

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Using her swords, Revy could use powerful long-distance lightning abilities more easily than normal lightning jutsu.

That's just what the lightning fangs let me do. Which is what allows me to perform Jutsu like Fangs Of Lightning.

And the part where i can absorb nature lightning as a energy source, it HAS to be natural lightning. I have no control over it, meaning to do it i would have to be standing somewhere up high DURING a lightning storn, and holding my swords to the sky, hoping a lightning bolt will strike them. The fangs will channel the lightning, and i absorb what i need through the handles. I'm not stupid enough to abuse an ability like this, trust me.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 10:27 pm

-Force Lightning, I'm hoping you can't move much while using this jutsu, and 10 posts is a bit long, 5-7 is better. Cool down is also needed.

-Force Lightning Explosion Technique, needs a limit on how many times you can used per force lightning

-Lightning Strike Armor, this needs a duration, I believe 7 posts it he standard for it.

- Lightning Burial: Banquet Of Lightning, it's a bit vauge you can do a few things with, is that per use or does each thing take another use?

-Fangs Of Lightning, they can't be random locations per use, meaning once one strikes the next four have to be close by, moving a little bit each time.

This what I see right now, I'm a bit off but this should be enough to keep it going.
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Wed 15 Dec 2010, 10:54 pm

For force lightning, i made it 10 because 10 posts would only be 5 of my posts. Would 8 posts be better? I don't want to make it to short, it's a Jutsu i plan on using to help deal with Bijuu

For the Force Lightning Explosion, I'll add a limit.

I'll add a duration to lightning strike armor..

FOr lightning banquet, i just have to swing the swords to the ground, one at a time, or both at once. If i do both at once, it will send 2 waves. they are capable of curving though.

For fangs of lightning, of course. It would be to much of a strain to spread them out to far. THe bolts would have to be close to one another, but not to where they are side by side. Like if i do id directly above where were fighting, they can come down anywhere around the area, but i cant send one a quarter way across a country, or to far from the chakra supplying it.

Since there seems to be a lot of confusion about this, heres a video. It shows some of the abilities i have here, and I'll give you the times in the video for what technique he uses, and when.




  • 0:00 - 0:30 (Lightning Dragon Tornado. Be sure to watch the small square in the newspaper to see how the Jutsu begins, when the lightning goes down and hits him)
  • 2:57 - 3:20 (Lightning Strike Armor)
  • 3:46 - 4:11 (Lightning Burial: Banquet Of Lightning)

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Sat 18 Dec 2010, 6:23 pm

Still waiting.....

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Sat 18 Dec 2010, 6:42 pm

Revy Izumi wrote:
And as for the natural ability, why not? It was something Raiga was able to do.
Umm...you aren't Raiga, and its not like he existed on the site. Like I am not Gaara, and Kida isn't Deidara.
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Sat 18 Dec 2010, 7:10 pm

I don't know why the big fuss. Its a cannon weapon, so it has my approval but just no control over natural lightning whatsoever. Its the reason Kirin was banned, because its an instant death. No body is fast enough to dodge natural lightning, unless you have Susanoo...which no one has. I'm all for elemental lightning in all those techniques.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Sat 18 Dec 2010, 7:51 pm

So are they approved then...?

And Genkou, you might want to open your eyes a little more. You probably would have noticed that i removed that ability 2 days ago

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Mon 20 Dec 2010, 10:52 pm

Well, since i have Vizers approval, and i did what was needed, I'll go on as if they are approved. If anyone has objections to it, then speak up. It's been like 6 days.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Mon 20 Dec 2010, 11:22 pm

Still need a second approval, sorry.

-strugs- Didn't see you say anything about removing it, and I didn't check. Though I don't recall it disappearing from the post the moment I had looked over it. Two days? You posted that comment three days prior to my post, sweatheart. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Mon 20 Dec 2010, 11:25 pm

Are you forgetting? You restore the forum every 2 days for your own personal needs. It reset all of my jutsu back to the previous versions, and added everything i took out.

Also, stop posting in my topic, your not a staff member. So I'll just ignore what you said and move on.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Mon 20 Dec 2010, 11:59 pm

Hm? Personal needs?I have restored the site three times: once to regain access to my account (which took place back in October), the second one because of a false alarm (turns out forumotion was updating the forums, go search on their forum if you want proof), and the third was used to just return some of the topics/posts that were lost because of the second restore.

The owner isn't apart of the staff in the first place, it is his/her choice to take the duties as the head admin or do little to no staff work at all. I gave up my head admin duties, and it is my choice to do nothing and to only help when I feel like it. It all revolves around choices.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Tue 21 Dec 2010, 12:16 am

Then go help where your needed, because your not needed here.

And no, thats your definition you made up of what it is. Thats also called abusing your power.

So stop spamming unless you have something helpful to say towards the topics actual purpose.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Thu 23 Dec 2010, 12:06 am

Name: Rain Reincarnation Technique (Sosei No Jutsu)
Rank: B
Element: Water
Description: A technique utilized in conjunction with Revy's "Ukojizai no Jutsu". When the rain is linked to Revy's senses from the Ukojizai, she will have the ability to seed chakra through the raindrops, though only ones close to the clouds. The chakra can spread out wide, as wide as the rain can reach since it is linked with her senses. When the chakra reaches Revy's chosen destination, the chakra will lower, and begin to create a clone out of the raindrops. The clone is only given a small amount of chakra, just enough to use a C rank jutsu, and is mainly used for scouting purposes. It is a good way to gain information on someone who she senses entering her Ukojizai. The clone is capable of full combat, although it will disperse after taking a few hits like a normal clone. After that Jutsu, the clone will disperse sending back any information it gained to Revy. If Revy is capable of entering a fully focused state, she is also able to link her sense of sight, and smell to the clone created, using the rain as a medium, and it's abilities as a catalyst. Sometimes this Jutsu can cause a type of malfunction, where the clone will keep the appearance of water, instead of taking on the complete look and colors of Revy, though it rarely happens. When the clone is created, it can travel as far as Revy's Ukojizai can reach, and even further after that, though as long as it stays within 300 yards of Revy's rain. The further it gets, the more brittle Revy's connection to it gets.

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Fri 24 Dec 2010, 8:24 am

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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Sat 25 Dec 2010, 2:56 am

Revy Izumi wrote:
The clone is capable of full combat, although it is only able to use a single Jutsu.

The clone is only given a very small amount of chakra.

I assume the single jutsu is a D-rank only.
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PostSubject: Re: Revys Stuff (Don't move)   Mon 27 Dec 2010, 12:02 am

There

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