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PostSubject: Loneliness.   Thu 28 Oct 2010, 10:16 am

The winds blew, with a cold breeze along its wings. Kiero was sitting right there in the valley of end, where two famous shinobi's all of time fought. They even had statues placed in the valley of end, facing each other. And if you look at it, you would be able to relieve the legend right before your eyes. Somewhat Kiero felt a slight nostalgia. Well maybe because Uchiha Madara is his ancestor. Afterall Kiero is an Uchiha like him, very much like him. " Hmmmm..." he silently mumured. Nobody was there to keep him company, he was all alone. He's not afraid of an ambush, but would certainly like one. Action hadn't hanged out with him for a long time, and he knew he was in a good shape. Yet he would rather have someone to talk with, someone interesting, that it wouldn't bore him. All around him, different animals we're watching Kiero. Birds, squirrels, deers different one's. They watched him curiously, as if thinking what why is there a shinobi here. In this lonely and abandoned area of Konohagakure. Time will tell. He allowed the wind carry the strands of his hair, it waved along with the wind, gently yet swiftly. Suddenly he stopped, he felt someone was coming towards him and he awaited.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Thu 28 Oct 2010, 10:39 am

Naito lurks in the neightbourhoods. He is constantly looking for weak ninjas. An easy prey which gives a good source for chakra and information. Who knows, maybe even keeping them as experimental objects. With little time and no will to wait. Perhaps overconfident, Naito approaches the first person he meets during his travel through the woods.
Jumping up and then landing on the stony surface of the statue.
((i don't think you mentioned your exact position on the map))
Naito stands and stares at the person and attempts to judge the quality of prey. He do sense high chakra pool but needs to study the body a little bit more. Would it be strong enough to survive what it would be put through?
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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Thu 28 Oct 2010, 11:01 am

A guy suddenly appears infront of Kiero. No forehead protector. No distinction whatsoever. Enough for Kiero to attack the guy without any warning. Afterall this is what he has been waiting for. Some action to his boring afternoon. Nothing is sweeter than to have your own prey come to you face to face. " Hmmm.. am I lucky today?..." Kiero murmured as he slowly stood from where he lied. " Now you shall be my guest..." he said when he finally stood face to face with the unknown guest. Kiero had that sinister smile upon his face, as if he is about to do something evil and deadly. In an instant cloud of smoke filled up his position. And when the smoke cleared there we're already 3 Kiero's standing right before the guy. Unknowingly, this are 3 different kind of bunshins. Its up to the guy to guess which one is deadly. In a matter of seconds, they all disappeared from where they stood. The first Kiero appeared on his side holding a kunai and ready to slash the guy in the stomach, while another Kiero appeared on his back which seemed to be holding a paper with the kanji " weight " on it and attempted to place it on the back of the guy. While the last Kiero appeared in the sky, ready to pummel his opponent with a kick aimed for the chest. Meanwhile, the real Kiero is in a tree not so far away from the target. Awaiting the result of his calculations.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Thu 28 Oct 2010, 1:12 pm

The expectations of a weak opponent had crashed. Naito had made a wrong pick. The opponent was quick too. This were not gonnš be an easy one.
Naito does what he is used to, using a hit and run tactic. By jumping away really fast, he gets away from the attack of the enemy. He lands on the grass next to the heads of the statues.
Naito can be happy about one thing, his prey got good body. However, there is no time to just stand and smile about it. He rushes off to the tree nearby and bumps from there to the next one. Having a plan of moving away and creating distance.
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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Sun 31 Oct 2010, 11:05 pm

Kiero was not suprised that the enemy was able to evade all of those simple attacks. It's just child's play anymore. Kiero chuckled from where he hid, " Time... to get serious ". Slowly the pupil's of his eyes swirled, in a few moments it revealed a full powered 3 tomoe sharingan. With his sharingan activated, the opponent can no longer hide. And it would be futile to runaway, since Kiero knows where he is going anyway. He 3 bunshins, all missing they're target regained posture again. Kiero quickly commanded them to regroup and attack again the shinobi. They all noded to each other, in a matter of seconds they disappered from where they stood and followed the fleeing shinobi. Since they we're Kiero's clones, they all possessed the Sharingan that allowed them to quickly track the enemy. Soon, they we're able to close the distance with the shinobi. Two clones took the rear side, left and right each. While the third one jumped ahead of the shinobi to stop him. With Kiero's command, the clone from the left attacked the shinobi from the rear with a flying kick. The clone from the right also moved, and moved to target the shinobi with an elbow aimed to side of the head incase the first clone misses, which is highly doubted since its a suprise attack. Then the clone infront was already performing handseals.

Meanwhile the real Kiero caught up with them easily, he was positioned in the back. In short, all 4 of them we're boxing out the enemy.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Wed 03 Nov 2010, 11:06 pm

Naito is up in the air. He took a big launch, so he would be able to float for a while.
It was kind of expected that the opponent would follow. Rarely ninjas let their enemies get away. Naito observed the clones quick approach. Last time it was Naito's reflexe technique which saved him. This time he had prepared a counter attack. Chakra bugs came out of his sleeves and formed a strong arm of bugs. It would grab the chest of the kicker and swing him around to hit the clone of the opposite flank side.
If the bug arm would to miss, it would regroup to swarm around Naito, to cover his presens. Making any taijutsu miss him. The sharingan wouldn't dinguish Naito from the bugs. The bugs contains Naito's chakra and they gather very densly.
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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Thu 04 Nov 2010, 8:38 am

As the left clone in slow motion flew in the air, with one of his foot ready to hit the target with vicious amount of force. Then slowly bugs came out of the sleeves of the shinobi. As the left clone neared, the impeding doom seemed to be inevitable. As if the clone was sure to meet his demise in the form of those giant bug arm. Kiero had to think of somehow avoid those giant bug arm in a mere second, it may seemed impossible.

Gladly sharingan was there to help, its functions and abilities depicted that future event, where the clone will be caught by the bug arm. Well not anymore, with that ability Kiero already had a plan, something sinister and inevitable. The clone prepared to kick the target, but before he was able to, a giant bug arm formed from the sleeves of the shinobi. Right about the same time, the third clone infront already finished preparing the handseals, and without warning he exhaled a large mist cloud right into the area of the shinobi. It wasn't that fast, actually it was slow due to its size. But because the clone was suspended in the air, he was unable to evade the attack. The giant bug arm quickly caught the clone by his chest. It seems that the shinobi wants to use the clone was a weapon. Yet everything seems to be going along with the plan. Before the giant bug arm and the shinobi can do anything... not so far from where that happened, Kiero stood. Without warning he performed the tiger handseal, in a mere second while the giant bug arm still held the clone, it exploded and the mist cloud that the clone exhaled a while ago proved its purpose. It was a trap, Mist Waltz jutsu creates a highly flammable mist thus creating a death trap for the shinobi in combination with fire. All along it was the Bunshin Bakuha among the three clones Kiero prepared. Kiero murmured, " Perfect....." The explosion happened so close to the shinobi that he wont escape the explosion without losing an arm or two, plus add the fact that the mist greatly increased the size, range and deadliness of the explosion. Well if Kiero's lucky, this attack may have killed him already. Sadly the right clone was caught in the explosion, but quickly poofed into smoke signaling that it was the fake bunshin from the 3.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 6:55 am

Naito screams "Transformation technique!" He transformed some of his bugs into a shield and led it block the explosion. By the strong shockwave, he is sent of flying and crashing down to the ground. The shield puffing as it cancels and the bugs which remained, fell to the ground dead or unconcious. Naito rumbles around on the ground of the force before he could get up.
"I guess I have to use that. Never thought it would be required against one ninja." Naito prepares handseals for a clone technique. Bugs come out of his clothes from behind Naito's back and turn into a clone. It's an attempt to hide it in the blindspot. He is also aware of the power of his opponent's Sharingan. A clone wouldn't work as an illusion.

EDIT: Chakra bugs got the ability to drain chakra. Eating it from the clone and the air. Causing the explosion to be weaker toward Naito's direction. Allowing him to survive also with the help of a "simple shield".


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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Fri 05 Nov 2010, 9:02 am

OOC:

I don't think a simple shield like that without any actual jutsu can withstand the impact of that explosion. If it was only the Bunshin Bakuha's explosion I could understand, but with the added fire power of the Mist Waltz jutsu I doubt that you could shield yourself with bugs. Basically, your post is unreasonable so please fix your post.

P.S, what's the use of ranking jutsus if a A-Rank+B-Rank jutsu combination can be simply avoided without using any jutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Fri 12 Nov 2010, 11:02 am

OOC: You never stated anything there that the bugs drained the chakra of the clone. And even if the explosion of the clone was weakened the mist will still most likely kill you. Once the mist was dispersed, its going to be impossible for your bugs to eat it. Especially when you just suddenly state that even though it wasn't even stated in your past posts. That's Godmod. Saying something you actually didn't do.
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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Sun 14 Nov 2010, 4:15 pm

OOC: Whats so bad about my post? Why do you not roleplay? The explosion is deadly, I get that. Naito is not dead. At least not to due my last post.
I'm not trying to cheat with the added text. You didn't approve my post and requested me to edit it and so I did. I added more stuff, in hope it would get approved. It doesn't change the fundamation. Naito still is blocking the blow with a shield. Note also Naito does everything which is written by this account. Naito is not doing something which he doesn't do. If that is even possible to perform?
I think you are closer to godmodding than I with trying to force me to surrender my character to death.
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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Fri 19 Nov 2010, 7:23 pm

OOC;

The explosion is not made of chakra therefore that whole thought is wrong. And a B rank shield will not stand up against an A rank tech.

Plus you acknowledged that you made a jutsu in between that time and the clone exploding meaning that the time you were making those seals the mist was already around and you and the explosion made it bigger...the clone explosion is a huge explosion with a big radius. Including the Mist, the tech is S rank proportion with that combination.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Mon 29 Nov 2010, 10:05 am

The wide explosion occured leaving a huge crater in the part where it happened. And after the smoke cleared, the body of the missing-nin was in the middle of the crater, heavily damage. His skin deeply burned and damaged. He had no chance to escape the demise Kiero had planned against him. Kiero chuckled, he knew that his plan was perfect. The target barely had a chance of counteracting against it. With a faint smile upon on his face, Kiero left the vicinity leaving the dead body of the missing-nin on the forest.

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PostSubject: Re: Loneliness.   Mon 29 Nov 2010, 10:32 am

He heard a large explosion, smoke rising into the air of the area. Akumu, with two bunshin behind him sprinted towards the area. The explosion could have killed someone, or something. Whatever it was Akumu needed to eat. Calcium was a must for him, and anything would suffice, even the bones of a human. As he traveled he got to there idiot very quickly due to being rested up from the last night. He had taken down not only an anbu of theearth village, but the raikage as well. With killing them he knew there bodies would be of importance. He kept that in mind as he arrived in the area of the explosion, whatever had caused it must of really needed to kill the other missing ninja. It burnt the ninja a lot, third degree burns were relevant, and death had occurred. Akumu made sure that this ninja would not be getting back up as he pointed his finger at the ninja's head, a bone merged from the finger tip at lightning speed, going through his head and down into the earth. He began to gauze the body up from head to toe. Tieing it around his own back to only head towards the south west once again. The three bodies in his possession would get him far. He would see what the sand had to offer first.

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