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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 04 Jan 2010, 11:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Tue 05 Jan 2010, 2:05 am

[OOC: No post reply within 48 hours. Hybris Kaguya is now dead. This post would be more...satisfying if I were not so tired.]

Similar to a masked rider, the ninja shout out a signature cry as his lunge for the woman exerted forward. <<Haitian Punch!>> His fist hitting the hilt of the weapon, his chakra flowing through the weapon which powered up to a much greater extremity, the saw drilled through the woman and lodged itself within the woman. The water crashing down on her and the others in the area. The water coated saw shredded through her clothes with ease as it truck the flesh of her left mammary product. The rotating saw shredded into the bulbous sack of yellow cellular gelatinous, the metal catching onto the flesh of the woman as rotated clockwise. The saw spooked forwards, as it hit the inner chest cavity of the woman, cutting through the bone and cutting though the heart Woman in front of him. The Ninja dislodged the weapon from her upper left chest as the blood and carnal mix of bones and heart tissue; a glazed over look of death in eyes. His hand testing the weapon of death in his hand as the claw came into contact with her neck, dislodging it from her body as he set her up against a tree. The man had given no effort in this kill as he pulled off the woman's ring, her symbol of being part of the Akatsuki, her headless body being stripped of everything on it as the man wrote up a letter.

<Dear Akatsuki,

I am not known of your members, how strong you are, who your leaders are, and where you are located, but take notice to this. Your fate shall end the same as we hunt down every single one of you guys. Little by little your forces will dwindle like a forsaken candle. You will soon be on the run as your headstrong administration will crumble on it's own foundations. This is just the beginning
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Such letter was attached the tree that was placed behind Hybris, one boob having, and now headless wonder. Wiping the blood and carnage form the woman's on her hair, Cocaine's hands rose as the head was tossed, his hand s pointing it toward the Acid producing ninja to the displacement of him.
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Tue 05 Jan 2010, 2:39 am

The man took his hands and rubbed them together. He now disregarded the Child who had been their. He could do nothing but smirk, seeing as the kill is claimed. He reached out, and grabbed hold of the females head. Letting his britches fall into decent, and shoving a device into the moistened cave which was placed carefully upon the face of the female. He quickly decided to use the warmth of the cavity to calm his exertions. Constantly the bubbling, and slurping sound echoed throughout the area. As if the rain drops had fallen on a field of slugs. The back and forths of it all. Exciting no less. For good minutes the intrusion occurred. The detached head of the female, being shamed. The robe that was now on the ground, soon to be set to flames. As the drifting electric shocks drilled deeper into the cranium of the young female. The Grasping reality set, and for a time, a shock, a jerk. One tremendous jolt of acid paste blasted into her head. Melting a giant hole directly in the back of the cap. The prize, the bonus was complete. The now sizzling skull tossed to the ground, as Anberlin commanded his leg to rise. He brought it down with immense force. Smashing the skull into thousands of fragments. The brain was devoured only moments before. The eyes boiled out from her head, the teeth rotted at alarming rates. Anberlin hiked up his britches, smirking a bit as he spoke. ["What next?"] He asked calmly.
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Tue 05 Jan 2010, 4:34 am

{Exit, Ya two seem to got things covered.}
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Tue 05 Jan 2010, 10:45 am

As hito was scooting his coffin away, he was wondering why those men were there. Hito suddenly hit a hill and rolled down violently; his stuff, bottles, clothes, and other things that he stored fell out of their places and was mixing themselves with the dizzy hito. Finally the coffin was lodged between two trees. the problem was, the opening of the coffin was laying face down. Making it very hard for him to get out.
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Wed 06 Jan 2010, 1:54 am

Cocaine watched the disillusion child roll down the gentle slope of a hill and decided he could not be bothered with things he could simply call "roaches" and ignored him completely. Looking at the man besides him, Cocaine decided it was time to depart. Their time in the leaf was a good one, if not enjoyable to certain individuals. The ninja himself laughed giddily as his jutsu effects still over took his body with grandiose; his mind with an enlightened mood of happiness. Cocaine started whistling as he twirled around the weapon, his masked face tiled slightly to the side as he disappeared along with Anberlin.

<Exit

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Hybris-Dead [Heart cavity drilled out by chainsaw mounted weapon.]
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Wed 06 Jan 2010, 8:52 am

Anberlin, scoffed. The time in Leaf was short. It was exciting that these two shinobi where now able to consider themselves "Yotobi". This was only the beginning. With the initiation mission a success. Now that these few good Akatsuki where slain. Anberlin made no mind to even bother with that Ek, Person. He simply turned, and vanished from the area. Along side the Cocaine. No trace of him being here would be visible, due to the fact that this entire area had been drenched down.

[Exit and Tally-hoe.]
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 18 Jan 2010, 3:41 am

Hito waited for hours in the dark expanse of his coffin, the air supply cut off and soon was enveloped in the cold, falling in and out of consiousness. It was the first time he had experienced fear. It didn't feel cold, hot, or a finger up his spine like most people say. it felt like someone had pulled him from his body and his heart in a painful grip. his eyes went blurry with something in it. it began to cristalize with the rest of the things in there. his team would get mad. They would get very mad if he let those lunches freeze too much. even though that was a trivial thing, he held onto that thought until it was all he could think of. not of those horrible faces, the actions, the snake fire that attacked him or the gut-wrenching voices. the man that had laughed. he hated that man and his laugh. it made him think of graveyards, his family that he had left, and all of the people that he couldn't see nor save.
every few hours he tried opening the coffin but it wouldnt open so he soon gave up. waiting for someone to come for him and for the dead. it was always with the dead. he was always with them when there was death. he rememberd eki and asking him what his goal was. he said it was his serenity. but now his serenity was ripped, his well being gone and his self-worth raped. he needed to find a new goal in order to keep his head. in order to face those men who had spared him, he would make them rue the day that they left him still able to move. his goal would not be for revenge for the people that died, nor for the peace that they ripped from him. it will be to kill anyone who gets in his way. his serenity will be in killing the ones that his country orders him to. to be strong and calm for the ones that can't.
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 18 Jan 2010, 4:01 am

Ki had watched the entire thing from a dark window. he had been checking on his students in case they were awake and needed something. he looked over the training grounds and noticed a fiery snake. after that he saw a small objet rolling down the hill. when he looked closer he noticed through the atoms that there was a dead body inside.
ki waited until the men left and watched xarias, the foster mother of his neice die a horrible death. he then made breakfast for the kids and walked out to the garden, past the stone gate and to the training feilds where all of it took place. he walked down the hill and picked up the coffin. he heard crying. "hello?" ki layed it down and tried to open the coffin. it was locked from the inside. "hello? open the door."
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 18 Jan 2010, 4:26 am

Hito tried to look through the salty ice on his eyes to the lock. he reached an iced arm slowly, the refrigeration made it hard for him to move freely as the metal squeaked inside of him. with much difficulty he opend the door and was faced with warm, morning air. his voice box was shot, his eyes could only see a tall man with white hair with the sun filtering through the trees. An Angel? he thought before laying his head on the edge of the coffin.
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 18 Jan 2010, 7:35 am

Ki looked over to what he thought was a dead body. He scanned his insides and saw metal netted reinforcements, replaced organs for weapons, fake skin, fake eyes, and he also noticed that the chakra that would be near the veins had increased greatly and had replaced the veins, making him have an insane amount of chakra. meaning that no matter how small he is, he can control and use his chakra to a large extent. Ki noticed that the coffin was refrigerated and it took most of the child's energy to helf it on his shoulders. even though the child could sense cold, he never shiverd and could withstand it to extreme tempatures. the cold steam was billowing out and ki had a hard time to look any further in that 3 second glance since he had to recontour all 24 of his pupils to see right.
ki closed his eyes and chuckled. he bent down and picked up the kid in the crook of his arm. even if he touched the child's body with his bare hand it wouldn't kill him. since he was already dead. " lets get you out of those scruffy clothes and oil those limbs of yours." ki closed the coffin, switched off the refrigeration and picked it up. moving torwards the hotel for him to sleep for the rest of the day. in the nighttime, he would train.

exit me and hito [closed]
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PostSubject: Re: Hito waiting for dawn( pm author to join)   Mon 18 Jan 2010, 12:52 pm

Mr. Snuggles wrote:
Ki had watched the entire thing from a dark window. he had been checking on his students in case they were awake and needed something. he looked over the training grounds and noticed a fiery snake. after that he saw a small objet rolling down the hill. when he looked closer he noticed through the atoms that there was a dead body inside.
ki waited until the men left and watched xarias, the foster mother of his neice die a horrible death. he then made breakfast for the kids and walked out to the garden, past the stone gate and to the training feilds where all of it took place. he walked down the hill and picked up the coffin. he heard crying. "hello?" ki layed it down and tried to open the coffin. it was locked from the inside. "hello? open the door."

This is meta gamming Ms. Ki. You can't say you saw the whole thing because you wasnt in the topic at all, because you just joined, but I'll let you get away with your meta gamming this time. But please don't do it again.
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