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PostSubject: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 1:39 am

The mist village Shion thought as he gripped the wire his sensai told him too. His long dark coat flew behind him as the 2 ninjas took off in the dead of night,whats in the hidden mist village he wondered thinking about the promise he made to Akina and Ayame.He told them dont worry the next time you see me I will be strong enough to protect you. As the last time they fought, Akina put everything on the line to save his master who couldnt do anything against the ninja of the hidden mist.He had been jumped twice in the same day the first one was handeled easily enough but the second."I dont know how" he said
"Huh" the master said looking back as Shion looked lost in thought.
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 3:48 am

I mean why would he attack so reclessly "arroh" a bird crowed breaking his concentration.
stupid bird i dont have time to care about your problem right now he thought.
The master looked up at the bird and stared for a while as if it was important some how
fixated on this bird Shion couldnt help but stare at it as well Its just a bird it dosent seem to be special in any way.
The master closed his eyes and said "so its started" Shions eyebrows dropped trying to figure out what the old man was talking about.
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 4:18 am

"Shion I need you to listen" he finally broke his silence looking up from his hat, "go back to the village and talk with the hokage"
"but sensai I"
"dont argue with me" he snapped. "This is not going to be easy" he said letting go of the wire and stopping"
he explained "that that bird we just saw was kyotee domos the hokages. Im going on to the hidden stone village. to destroy these people"
"but i can fight sensai you remember" Shion whined as he was looking forward to whatever was going to happen.
"Im not scared at all besides"
I know he wants to go with me but its too dangerous maybe i can he thought
Shion I need you to defend the village, enemy may intrude at any time and youll need to be there to help your comrades didnt you say youll never let anyone hurt your land well heres your chance" he said smiling showing all his razor sharp teeth.
"Sensai" Shion said picking up on the fact hes trying to protect him
"now Go thats an order" he barked
"yes sir" Shion said and flew the other way
"I dont know whats going on but if the village is in trouble i have to do my part i wish i could have got atleast a little bit of training but this will have to do"
Ninja art beast mimicry All 4s jutsu he transformed to increase his speed and ran all the way home to the hidden leaf.

ooc:so sorry to take your posts and put words in your mouth but i assume you got the message too feel free to change anything in those last posts and i will change mine to reflect that anyways gl
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 6:18 am

( yes, i understand; but i didn't help to think that you portrayed as cool
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 11:29 am

lol sorry i dont know if im understanding right is that a good thing?
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 7:32 pm

( its good, im just suprised)

kamoku did a half grin, his eyes glowing from underneath the hat. the sun was falling, making everything bathed in gold as if the bees spirited away their honey to soak the world with. kamoku looked to the southwest. he had been going torward the east to the mist, but it looked like he had to go his full speed to get there. " this'll hurt in the morning." he groaned, taking his claws out of the glove. as he stood there for a few seconds, his claws vibrating so fast that they could only be seen in a blur. in a split second kamoku was there, the next one, he was gone. he had teleported directly to the leaf.

kamoku bent to his knees, coughing and hacking. " no, no... it hurts now..." he mumbled, his eyesshuddering in his sockets. he walked over to a jounin and gave a slip of paper to him. " give that to a gennin inuzaka. master of the moon is his nickname." he said, holding a grin. he then jogged out of the leaf easily. " jeez, i still can't beleive that the kage of the leaf is ordering around a jounnin of the sand. oh well, this'll be interesting." a few hours later, he was at the sand and took a rest there, telling the sand of what he was doing. they accepted and he ran to the stone with most of his equipment ready.
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 8:37 pm

http://naruto-x.forumsmotion.com/hokage-office-f10/shion-report-to-hokage-now-t4192.htm#63869

Now worried Shion examined the room for signs of an invasion."it can be anything, were dealing with exceptional shinobi here." "is it the desk" he wondered staring at it."or is it the ceiling" He said throwing up his hands to protect him from the ceiling he was sure was going to come down."No thats silly It caan only be" he said turning his eyes behind him.
"Shion Inuzuka" a chunnin taller than domo entered the room
"Ahhhh" shion jumped as the man burst through the door.
"sorry to scare you but i thought i would find you here"
"You were looking for me" he asked I know he must have heard of what an exceptional ninja i am and wants me to help defend the village.
"Your sensai Kamoto Willis asked me to give you this"
Thats impossible Shion thought examining the letter in his hand. Kamoto Willis sensai had went on to the stone village" So how would he give him such a document.
If this is the trap I doubt it would be in the form of a letter also if i sound the alarm right now i will have to fight him in the hokages office the hokage would not be pleased if i destroyed his room.
"Thanks" he said taking the letter and opening it
'Shioasn I cbsbd'
He attempted to make out the horribly written words" i have no idea what this says.
It looks rushed". he said outloud
"Yes Kamoto came running here he was out of breath and he looked in pain when he asked me 2 give this too u Let me see if I can try to make it out".


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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 9:08 pm

Spoiler:
 

PS: if you die, ill kill you
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Sun 08 Nov 2009, 10:40 pm

"That was beautifull" Shion said as a tear came to his eye. He had been trusted with his sensais war poem.The chunnin couldn't help smiling as shion shouted "I will do my best sensai" with a burning passion.finally... " He then took the note back from the man. Who said "ok now i need you to go to the academy, make sure everything is ok over there im couting on you shion" "Yes sir" shion flew out of the buiding and ran through the vilage.

ooc: my mistake but in essance it kinda makes sence i would get that wrong kamako willis lol
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PostSubject: Re: A new Adventure Journey to a hidden land   Mon 09 Nov 2009, 12:23 am

lol, kamoku willow
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